I do agree that your shading has improved-- nice job on the wings! I also agree with you on her legs... I think she needs some knees! Her legs look a little noodle-like and I think they're a little too long for her body. But I think just adding a joint in there will help to improve on your already awesome doujin! Keep up the great work! :D
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the shading was a real hard part,
i think i am improving,
but i think her leg looks real weird,
after i scanned my work, i used photoshop effects on it,
the pencil work looks good i think
comments please :)
Time spent: 3.5 hours for sketching 1 hour for applying effects (using photoshop)
photoshop effects: levels, hue/colourize, unsharp mask, brightness contrast, dodge tool
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very good,very cute,very beautiful..................................(...)
but her legs look wierd,just like your face(joking man!)
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Good job on the shading,
the wings and the hair looks great!
Proportion wise, her legs are bit long in comparision to her body.
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I really like this! The wings and the hair , look great!
The legs are a bit strange.That is about it! Keep them coming! -
the thing that i liked more of your work is the hair and the details on the wings!
i wanna do the same on mi sketches ^^ -
Nice touch on the ribbons, pikac! My eyes got diverted looking at them. ^^^ Oh, but I remember someone (BlueAngel17?) commenting that you don't draw typical anime-styled eyes, right? Same here with "Panthenon"... but I guess your strength is in drawing little details like accessories and such (here, it's the ribbons; for I wish... by pikac , it's the character's necklace and dress trimmings). Maybe you could emphasize more of those accessories in your next drawings? Anyway, 'hope I helped you, pikac.
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