I do agree that your shading has improved-- nice job on the wings! I also agree with you on her legs... I think she needs some knees! Her legs look a little noodle-like and I think they're a little too long for her body. But I think just adding a joint in there will help to improve on your already awesome doujin! Keep up the great work! :D
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the shading was a real hard part,
i think i am improving,
but i think her leg looks real weird,
after i scanned my work, i used photoshop effects on it,
the pencil work looks good i think
comments please :)
Time spent: 3.5 hours for sketching 1 hour for applying effects (using photoshop)
photoshop effects: levels, hue/colourize, unsharp mask, brightness contrast, dodge tool
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fireflywishes Retired Moderator Nov 01, 2006
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exal Nov 01, 2006
very good,very cute,very beautiful..................................(...)
but her legs look wierd,just like your face(joking man!)
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Yu-huang Nov 01, 2006
Good job on the shading,
the wings and the hair looks great!
Proportion wise, her legs are bit long in comparision to her body.
Overall, great job! -
simo Nov 02, 2006
I really like this! The wings and the hair , look great!
The legs are a bit strange.That is about it! Keep them coming! -
annakee Nov 05, 2006
the thing that i liked more of your work is the hair and the details on the wings!
i wanna do the same on mi sketches ^^ -
charaznableamurorei Nov 24, 2006
Nice touch on the ribbons, pikac! My eyes got diverted looking at them. ^^^ Oh, but I remember someone (BlueAngel17?) commenting that you don't draw typical anime-styled eyes, right? Same here with "Panthenon"... but I guess your strength is in drawing little details like accessories and such (here, it's the ribbons; for I wish... by pikac , it's the character's necklace and dress trimmings). Maybe you could emphasize more of those accessories in your next drawings? Anyway, 'hope I helped you, pikac.
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