Lum-chan, at first I had no though other than ''Scary desu... >__<'' ~ XD
Poor Hotaru, why does she have to be the killer? Blood is no good, ne? XD
Yeah, it really is darkie. >.<
Can I give some suggestions? >.<
I loved the wall you made, the bricks remind me of chocolate bars... ( XD ) But there's a big ilumination problem
on this area, next to the bottom of her dress... it's like the light on the dress is different from the one on the
bricks, you see? Maybe painting this part of the dress in a darker color would be good~
This mist around creates a mistery atmosphere, but it's too white and light, I don't think it fits the
ambient... >.<
Good use on the stocks! I liked the house, but the trees are very well-positioned too~
That's pretty much it. Good work as always! ^.^
But it is too scary... Lum-chan, hidoi! o>_<o
Kyay! XD