nyeeeeee......you could have explain why you like cloud strife in the first place here. but that's not my comment about this. hee,hee....
anyway, it's a nice work too. i'll consider this as a beginner's art.
the upper part is alright, but his trousers seems to have left some important aspects, like the folded lines. it looks flat. plus, plz add some shades to create the realistically fold effect too.