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Original: the hope -6

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another one for the Tobira Project
I've made out some more now. the character is Christina Bellnight, a british girl about 12 years old that loves fashion and playing and normal lifestyle of her age, like going to school and mmeet her firends. She could be a simpleordinary girl if she wasn't the keeper of the door Hab door of hope. wich doen't mean the only thing she can do is to make people belive and be happy, she can do lots of more stuff, but she doesn't know yet how.

about the work, it took me almost the sleep off. I couldn't go to bed before i finished it. please tell me if I have stand for something good.

Kisses!

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Comments

  1. iridescentstar Oct 10, 2006

    I think you have the start of a wonderful idea. I love the character sketch and like the idea of a "Guardian of Hope" It's really unique and I feel if you continue with this, that it would become a great inspiration piece to all audiences. Although I would be careful to not fall into an overused theme of schoolgirl who finds she has secret powers and wishes that she had her ordinary life back. I'm not sure what your plot is yet but you should definitely build your story to some climatic effect...I feel like your character Christina should be burdened a little each time she changes someone's life, because to be a "Keeper" of something you have to invest alot of yourself into that role, so after awhile it should begin to wear on the bearer's soul. Just some suggestions, I am excited to see where you take this! She's very cute! Although I'd love to see her in color, even though the grayscale is great in itself. Anyway, I hope this helps. =3 And good luck!

    ~Rin XD

  2. Acuni Oct 10, 2006

    she has a nice story and a good job at her age....i think she can make it without problems to be a good keeper.
    The girl looks cute but she looks older than 12 years old..not that that is wrong but it sometimes disturbes....i think that that are the colours that make her look old
    you made a realy good job..but don't owerwork yourself

  3. Anjhurin Oct 10, 2006

    Oh, pretty nice drawing again. As said before, scale of grey is really good, the shading is well done. Maybe her hands / fingers would need a little more detailling, but otherwise it's quite good. She's got a gentle smile, really brings peace in the mind.
    In echo to the first comment, i think that bringing happiness to others is the hardest work there is, and that to burden one with it is condemning him/her to not feel happiness for him/herself...

    Anyway, thumbs up ;)

  4. annakee Oct 12, 2006

    im very glad to see your doujinshis. those gray tones are really awesome

  5. MapleRose Retired Moderator Oct 17, 2006

    aww, she looks so cute! I like her expression and pose, it represents hope really well. I also like how you did her eyes :)

    The greyscale is nice too ^___^

    nice work!

  6. mechanical-angel Oct 26, 2006

    cute! ^^

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