Hey obaa-san ^_^
Well, been a long time indeed since i last saw a doujin from you ;)... Anyway, this one's kinda original (in the
way that it's not your zodiac saga), and i think you've done a good job. The hair is pretty good, and the way
she turns her head is well done too.
Maybe it's lacking a bit of details / shading on the cloth (especially the back of it, it seems too
"flat", maybe adding some folds would be good). Also, there's something wrong with her pupils, one is way
more dilatated than the other... so maybe one of her eye is not focusing on the same thing as the other, but otherwise
it's disturbing ^_^'
Otherwise, as i said, it's nice !