the shading is definitely nice and all but u might want to work on her shoes and the perception of the character. its a bit off. u might also want to fix the face since it looks sort of squished.
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hi there, oh well, i think this is my best of doujinshies yet, took real hard work in shading since i am just a beginner in doujin making, i got the idea of her pose from a magazine, oh i used adobe to make the pic darker and colourized it, hope u all like ie :)
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wingsofsteel Oct 04, 2006
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BlueAngel17 Oct 04, 2006
i like the shading and the way you really made fine, deep outlines. the body structure is fairly good. ^^
maybe widening her eyes a bit like anime style would help. >.<
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simo Oct 04, 2006
She's really nice, even if you are a begginer you did a good job! Keep them coming!
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Oyazi Oct 06, 2006
well .. I have pretty much the same thing to say as the rest of the commentators said. The eyes should be larger. The figure is alright but should have more shadows (e.g. on the arm or legs) so it looks more 3-D-ish. I think the back ground and texture of the dress is the strength in your picture. I really like the lower part of the dress ( the folds on the skirt), it is well done.
hopefully we will see more doujinshi s from u
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exal Oct 14, 2006
good,good
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Yu-huang Nov 01, 2006
The dress, the shading and her pose are in my view impressively done.
And I disagree with what wingsofsteel said about the shoes, they look fine to me.
I think the eyes should be widened though.Keep it up!+fav
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