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Original Doujinshi

Life is loveable

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Life is loveable

By phaner

 Original Doujinsh
This item is in the elite gallery. © 2006 - 2008 ~ phaner

 
Submitted:
2y 1wk ago by phaner
Category:
Original
Official Creator:
Type:
Doujinshi
Resolution:
719x835
Size:
278 kB
Views/Downloads:
144/9
Comments/Favorites:
3/0

what can I say...ummm..... well, hi...
well , this account is my sister's, she just gave me 2 weeks ago cause she doesn't want to use this account anymore ^_^'
so I thought it would be nice if i submit some of my artworks here
this drawing is really.... a disaster T_T well, I tried hard though
btw, the small umbrella on the left coner is my little logo
please comment , comment , comment , your comments will help me ALOT so please DO
thanks , bb


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WELL HELLO! MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM, I ACTUALLY REALLY LIKE YOUR DRAW..... IS WIERD BUT REALLY NICE.. CONGRATULATIONS!

Well if you want a realistic proportions and shading then my comments are: The neck is irregularly thin. The hair should be a bit bulkier. The nose is shadowed a lot that makes it look artificial. The chin is quite small.
Just a reminder that comments are for realism but if that is your style then just ignore this then.

I agree witrht he previous poster that the neck is a tad too thin. Other than that, this drawing looks great, the coloring is nice too. :)

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