Lovely doujin Sagnarn! Nice job on her umbrella and the overall composition! The shading is good as well, though it could be a little cleaner in some areas... Other than that the only other thing I see is that I think her left eye is either higher or smaller than her right eye. But it's a lovely work overall! Keep it up! :D
Hiroaki Samura Mangaka
Bee Train Studio
Blade of the Immortal Series
Makie Otono-tachibana Character
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My doujnshi of Makkie thanks with Hiroaki Samura for this fabulous manga
original by Hiroaki Samura
Time : 10 hours ~ +
Big work on shadows with different pencil 5h 4h 3h 2H and Hb
Enjoy it ! :pacman:
Edit: i have retry the face / eyes and background
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fireflywishes Retired Moderator Sep 24, 2006
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Wapy Sep 30, 2006
Nice shading and lightening effects! You did all of this? You really are skilled. You must have a great patience too... the image is really cool, lots of details, I love it!
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SilentNymph Sep 30, 2006
This is so detailed so my compliments for patiente and the overall composition.
Well........as always I'm gonna play bad and start with the critique.
If you would not have wrote that it's done with 5 different pencils I could have swore it was only one and not higher then 2B. Why? Because the shadeing looks flat to me - it lacks contrast. Your stongest shade here is the one on the material draped over her arm- and it ain't dark enough. My advice would be to go and concider that the darkest shades should be : the underside of the umbrella, the hair ( since it's a dark colour ) and the material folds.
Hope it is helpful. I thought I should write this since this is a doujin worthy of serious critique. Keep it up with the good work:)
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