That's pretty good

I use pencils and I still can't do that kind of a job without erasing.

I also like the originality. There's so much fan art these days it's hard to tell what's original anymore.

However, I unfortunately can't let you go without a little critisizem

His sword looks really, really, really, really (52 "really's" later...) really curved for a samurai sword. I would suggest straightening it

Your forshortening, You know, when something is coming at you, in the picture, is a little off. He looks kinda like he's turning his body and leaving his wings behind.
And tell me if I'm wrong, but I thing that'd make for quite the flight into battle (Darth Vader comes to mind here.....).

So, the key points are make his sword less curved, and position his wings so they look like they're attatched to him (i.e. the right wing should look like it's coming at you).

Other than those you did a stupendiously splendiferous job and should keep up the good work

hey shadowwraith thankyou so much about your commentary!is the first commentary Ive received in minitokyo !and well about the sword its true its very curved ,,,but this sword it is based on a japanese painting that I saw once ,this samurai in the painting had a very large and curved sword..,,,the sword its really curved so its easier to get out and cut,,and of the wings thankou now I know I know !Ill try hard!thankou so much you know ,critizizm its so helpful ,thankou cuz you like it!am so happy now!

I find this amazing and I love it.
Only critisizem I have is that the feet dont match the stance very well.

As for the sword, its very nice, I cant remember the name of it right now but; Doku from Ninja Gaiden uses a sword which is curved avout the same degree.

Nice work!

Don't listen them!Well the criticism is good thing becouse with it we become beter,but hei this is not a photo or portrait to be like real,of course there have to be some proportions,but your drawing look very well and know.And this for the sword it's not right...it may be straight,but we to see it curved so don't worry.And i like to draw,but to draw thing like that just from my mind hope one day to become as good as you are now bye

thankyou so much to everyone!Now I will try to improve the porportions i my work!thankyou!am so happy!

This has got to be my favourite picture, of the ones you have. I like this.

One of my favourite. =P Haha. Even though its like a simple drawing, it still looks so cool.

Nice work!