Wow.. First of all I absolutely love the scan and the effects around Shana ^^ Second, the extraction of the ruins/castle thing needs more work. And third, there are too many things that you have going on at once o_O I think the planets stand out too much too...

Oh my.. sorry for the critics.. But overall, it looks good Keep it up!

amazing, the planets look great with the many different striking colours, however maybe there are too many of them since due to the striking colours they draw a lot of attention [hope i didnt offend you ] the symbols look nice and so does the scan of shana that you chose to use, she suits well, there are a lot of comets and it gives the effect that they are crashing down onto the town and is destroying them, your title is really interesting and suits well with your wall, i like the concept of your wall and it seems to give of like a dangerous and destructive atmosphere due to the fire and the comets, overall you made a wonderful wall ^^

super! the vfalling stars look so beautiful
I love that blue planet it looks sooooo cute
the scan its pretty cute
but it could be better if the one at the back its not there (just delete it but dont mind my comments)
anyways fav! great work

wow, i love the planets theyre different i love the stars and the comets love the title, matches nicely with the wall im not a fan of the shana in the background, the big one is what i meant but ou chose a really nice scan anyway, overall nice wall~^^

O_O
I like the fiery words down there
lol... HEllo, Qianyi-san!
Glad to see U have a new wall there
The extraction needs more work, try zooming in 300px or so^^
I tihnk itll do better without the shana in the BG... U did the planets?! O_O I like the flower purple one
Ill say the fire is actually pretty good^^
Erm... the stars looks more like snow though... try changing the blending mode so itll blend in more...
and... the planets looks a lil oddly placed and the colors doesnt seems to match...
But the symbols looks great!
Good job
sorry for the critiques...

I like the overall concept, but as everyone has said, alot of work can be done. It shouldn't be too difficult to find a nice tutorial on extraction, as the castle looks too badly done (especially the front turret). The planets look to me like you just did an abstract design, then cut out circles. Again, there are several good tutorials for exploding planets and the like across the internet. But somehow, it does manage to look fiery in a cool way, and the comets aren't bad either. The scan is awesome though ^_^ But I also think you should take out the faded duplicate. MT usually frowns on walls that do that

I love this wall you made Chiaki-san ^.^
My pick for the Anime-Rivals contest
Great job!

emm...of all the Shakugan No Shana wallpapers I have seen, your creation looks outstanding than others, especially there's an 'realistic impact' felt by just a look! i guess the weird symbols you mean are Sanskrit characters (used as Buddhist religious symbols), as in the Time Stop Seal / Fuzetsu.
i think the orange planet's color tone needs a brighter light to suit its shining background. (that's just my humble opinion. gomen...)

the background is awesome really great

Sugoi...sugoi..desu!

Ouch Ouch! Superiorly done! It's totally awesome you know. Blending Shana scan with the Fire, the power of existence....meteor rain all over the starry skies, the planets representing the 3 worlds ..erhm... you know which i mean, Hmmmm , very very creative glyphs charactors.

Decent enough extraction on the scan but what i love is the scan ! Oh my goodness. It can be better but i guess they got it covered for you. ^ It's forgiving.

What got me it, your concept is vivid and Imaginative! Colorful and suiting Glyphs. Fiery! Color Composition ! The theme suits perfect and i felt the red hot passion behind the theme. Keep it up ! You made it !

Excellent.

Just lit up my day.

OHH this is perfect, looks like she's gonna destroy the intirre world alone ! ^_^

Personally, I think the planets are somewhat, out of place. I don't really think the planets blend in well. Perhaps too many stars too? The background objects don't really interact well, they feel like they are just individual objects placed there for no real reason. The buildings in the background look as if they were damaged by the eraser tool in PS rather than the comets too. My apologies about my criticism, and I hope you don't take offense. Good thing is, the extraction of the scan is rather clean, yet you might want to consider smoothing the image. It looks kind of grainy. ^^;

Great pic.

Wow.... How do people do all these stuff?
Although I don't think Shana is a kind of character that fits a cosmic background, this looks awesome
I really like the comets and the ring that surrounds Shana

its pretty darned good overall but the rings need to more oval i think. with weird symbols on it or sumthing xD