Wow, this is really beautifully detailed; the shading is done wonderfully! What you mean about the girl being off, is the leg is sticking out at an awkward angle. Other than that, beautiful work, and great job! Thanks for sharing!
Take care,
-"TreaGirl".

OMG 0.0 I'm at lost for words....
Did you ever consider becoming pro? ^-^
you really outdid yourself timothy-san, I don't see any flaws at all...really!

the painting is very good, the colouring is well done, you even made the shades of the two charas.
and the scene is great, it has a godd compositin.
keep it up

omg...

i love you! it is so colorful and beautiful! it just puts colors into my day! hope to see more soon and keep up your great work!

hey! wonderful work.

you really are a genius with water colours ! ^^

wahhhh! is so cute, cute, cute! DDD
i loove it! ^^
ypu have much talent! ^^
beautiful draw! i love this colors! ^^

fav! ;}

Nice
I love your watercoloring
The pic is really cute ^.^

Wow! This is so cute! The drawing is beautiful and the watercoloring is excellent! Awesome work! +fav

wow this is hell good, i can see why it took so long. it's really cute too*lol* i like the way how you coloured it and the drawing is fantastic too!

adding this to my favourites*kekeke*

hi, it looks so cute! beautifully done!

i love you.
KYAA~~~
This is super cute~!

You're lazy because it takes some very skilled artist longer to turn sucessful looking pieces for work,much like the one you shared with everyone ^-^.It looks adorable,the colouring you did is just brilliant,like something out of a children's book.Marvelous in every way,excellent work .

another great piece! wow! I'm like o.o! aaaaaaaa I hate you! how can you paint that way! ¬¬ hahahah well gotta gooooooooo.. ja-neeeeee

Oh my gosh! That's amazing! That is so awesome! Really AWESOME! Keep up the great work!

That's incredible, awesome drawing. It's perfect, so cute, it's even better than official artwork, i love it

they really look cute and it has that look like it was painted with a hand... nice!

sugoi ne, timothy kun! you took time making the bg even!.. also, you have a knack at capturing the expression of innocence in your doujin..! i particularly love the rending of their hair.. the way it fades to dark shades is totally kawaii.. only suggestion i perhaps could give is the outlining could do a little more part on the pic.. but kudos.. i love the skin rendering too and the blush on their cheeks! great work!

Great work you have, very cute><. I can never use water colors as well as you I can only draw with crayons or color pencils, what's a shame of me ^"^

Can anyone say Kawaii! I am in such envy of your water-coloring skills now! I absolutely love watercolor! I think it is a very expressive medium and it's artists like you that are the reason why love it so much

You've paid attention to every slight detail! I absolutely love it! I can't offer an advice on how to make it better, because I think it's perfect This deserves to be your fav - and mine

it's so cute >o<

I think its beautiful. I cant draw at all ...maybe the classic stick figures but hey, its good enough for me. I love this picture and its done in water colour too. SUGOI! what a pro! xDD [applause]