Nice doujin resplandor! Looks like an image straight from the manga or something! (I don't read/watch Inuyasha, so I'm just speculating...) Really nice job on the shading and that dragon-like thing on the left. The only thing I can see is that the lines for the shaded areas are a little prominent. If you blended those more to the same shade as the darker areas I think your doujin would be that much better! Well, keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing more from you! :D
(And in future posts... It might be nice to write more than "I hope you like it"... maybe tell us a little bit about what inspired your drawing or what materials you used?)