You drew that? Oh wow! You sure are good It's really lovely!

I soo love canson paper, it has that smooth grainy look to it (plus, when we had to draw on it in art class -a long time ago-, it gave a good feel under the pencil ).

Anyway, nice drawing, Aoki's pretty nice (as usual), but Denise's eyes are either too 'closed' or too close together (though, it's the way you draw her....). Really nice work on the hair and shading !
Oh, and i'm sure you still didn't tell me the story behind the scar on Aoki's neck

Thumbs up, good to see you 'more or less' alive

a great work *fav*

oh my! just look at that shading!
im so envious...makes me cry..i want those talent! waaahh! T.T
..sniff..sniff...

great job... keep it up!

wow.. this is well done.. =] beautiful

That is truly amazing! The shading is superb! Very well done!

Lovely pencil work... beautiful character design and shading; I especially love their expressions, they look so confident ^^ Wonderfully done

it is very well you have a lot of talent I hope to continue seeing but your works

Beautiful doujin Ryuuen! (as always!) Excellent shading and they're both so cute! (Though Denise looks a tad like a guy with those tufts of hair sticking up... ) I also agree with Anjhurin that there's something off about her eyes, but it's still such a well drawn doujin that despite all that I'm still going to add it to my favs! Keep up the great work!

Great drawings!

wow awesome draw, it looks so professional! *wwwooowww*

What's a Canson paper? o.O

Look so real! Ryuuen you're just so good at this. ^^ Denise looks like a guy, probably with that hair standing out, but I can't deny that it's such a good drawing.

*What's with that scar on Aoki's neck by the way?

That beautiful drawing! I like much the line and the drawing style, is really pretty. My congratulations by this good work! Thanks to share it.