nice wall, i love the abstract like background and the petals floating around^^
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Don't know which anime this girl is from.. if you know please tell me.
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enchantment Jul 24, 2006
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KOKUJINDESU Jul 25, 2006
Great wallie! I have a doujin based on the scan of that girl--one of my favorite scans. Good job!
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eternallegend Jul 25, 2006
i like the colours that you chose for the background, the petals that a floating around and i like the overall compositon of your wall with all the absracts ^^
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Imashitowareto Jul 25, 2006
the background is pretty!i like it!keep it on!
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BlueAngel17 Jul 25, 2006
eeeeowww... i love the bg.. the swirls.. oh, I couldn't do those things. maybe i should try doing those things from now on. >.< good job on this! sorry i dunno where she's from.. >.<
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Devilet Jul 25, 2006
Atmosphere
When I gaze at this wallpaper I see a lot of movement in the background. This is a background you'd expect to see a character with an action stance in it, someone holding up a sword ready to fight, or a gun pointed ... Maybe a jump in the air, falling. Whatever it is, I see here a girl standing looking very displeased at me. She looks mad enough to just take one of those swords and kill someone. Haaha, and the swirls in the background make her seem crazy, because it's making me dizzy just looking at it.
Composition
There aren't many physical elements placed in this wallpaper, because it is an abstact piece. Therefore, I can't understand the text, it seems really misplaced. Maybe a different font would of been better. I would think there'd be tech-type font, because of the abstract sequence. Oh, the girl is placed on the right, so that for windows users can leave their icons on the left, and not go over the girl, good thinking on that part. I'm thinking the effects should be more behind her, to focus the energy on her, so you don't get distacted to look in the middle, where a hole appears to be.
Colour
The colours are very basic in this wallpaper, you see purple and black is dominating. I see you took it from the original scan. But personally from experience, you should try a colour that makes the character pop out! This gives the wallpaper more depth and energy .. Now it looks very monotone and a tad boring in that department. Experiment a little more in that department. Unless you were going for a soft and calming scene, you would use very little variation in colour. But from the energy in the background, I don't think that's the case.
Quality
Ahh, here's another department you need to work on in this piece. The character looks a bit blurry, and she doesn't blend into the background so nicely. The droplets you put are also blurry, giving the wallpaper a low quality look. Make sure when you save your work, exporting; Make sure it's on 80% or higher depending on the resolution, otherwise a jpeg compression will make it very grainy, like you see in background effect.
Overall
I say you're on the right track in experimenting, you'll find a way to do your work you like best. Which style, colours, etc. Just keep practicing, and you'll get better, I remember doing wallpapers like this. Not saying I'm a professional, this is all merely a personal art review from me to help you improve. Keep it up always, good job!
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XelNaga-Tribe Aug 06, 2006
nada mal la imagen, pero esta muy pequeña T-T
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miraku-spike Aug 10, 2006
Hm....sry, dont know the anime. But great looking wallpaper you got there thou. Love the purplish bakground. Very nice.
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