hey alfonse-kun! nice drawing! i like the wings a lot!
it looks really nice, but his outfit on his lef side looks a little off.
other than that, it a good drawing^^
it would be better if there's a bg for the cool drawing^^
keep up the great work! ;)
Artist Comment
Hey everybody. ^^
I'm back with another Original Angel doujin, though I really don't think I should be submitting this piece
cause it's so bad. :\
But I guess this is what happens when you force yourself to draw up somethin. hehe
I dunno how I came up with this either...
I guess I was thinking of Ichigo's Bankai form, you know how he's in all black. Oh and I was thinking of Neo
too...and I was actually gonna draw some shades on this character...but ended up not doing so.
Oh and this doujin took me about 2 hrs.
I'm not too fond of the pose I chose, and the shading's iffy.
So I apologize about that. ^_^'
And I guess the wings are the main thing about this piece too. I spent so long drawing those things.
Well that's all I can say about this piece.
Please tell me what you guys think. I'd really like to improve this character later on and not make 'im look
so much like Ichigo.
So tips, comments, and critics are all welcome as usual.
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Midori-chan Jul 09, 2006
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Chloe Retired Moderator Jul 10, 2006
Nice! The wings look great and the character is awesome! Keep up the great work!
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TrigunPreacherGirl Jul 10, 2006
*Thinking: He kind of reminds me of Sanosuke from Ruroni Kenshin... also a bit of Vash, too... hmm... :D .*
I don't see anything wrong with this lovely artwork, except he's holding the sword on the blade... this could get messy...XD . Ouch!
His coat tails look a bit funky, too.
However, you've done a great job on this, and have inspired me to work on a new idea for a manga! Thank you for submitting such a cool piece of artwork! -
ladyai Jul 16, 2006
Nice work Yamichi. I'm so glad you finally submited something. I really like the wings and the character's hair. I agree with TrigunPreacherGirl. This picture does kind of remind me of Sanosuke from Ruroni Kenshin. I can't wait for your next piece of artwork.
Ja ne Yamichi ^_^
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julian1 Jul 17, 2006
the arms and legs are a bit deformed...... and the wings are like static, they look like as if they were made of cement. al, i suggest you do a bit of reference to existing works, that way, you'll improve.... anyway, good work, al.
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Hanazaki Jul 17, 2006
Well, the first look at it, I thought it was Jin Kazama from Tekken. I should agree with Midori-chan about that left cloth. Nice try. Thanks for sharing this.
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