wow its really good. i like the way you color it. i think there's something wrong on risa's hand its a bit long... its really good keep it up

Ooo wow! Yes your time spent coloring it has certainly paid off *stares at pretty hair*

This is a really nice piece of doujinshi I love the sketchy look you have with the outlines... some people may see it as lazy - but I think it is a great added touch - it really adds character to your work

The characters looks fantastic as well - can't say I know who they are, but I do love the way you've draw them, the proportions are in good shape.

Color usage is lovely - like I said - love the hair, and the eyes have a vividness to them - always good. Pretty background as well - nice soft colors, with feathers to also create that feel of softness The white uniforms look a tad bit dull, but I know you can't really do that much with white - and it's uniforms, so it's okay

Finally, not sure what I think about the text - but I guess it is there so no one steals your art - and to identify the characters

Keep up the good work

I love the colours <3 I can never colour as good as you do. The proportion is kinda out though. The eyes are actually too small.
Either way, great work <3 Keep those drawings coming!
Satorisa rocks my socks

i love the drawing i love that couple! *-* is awesome !

COOOOOOOOL! Satoshi and Risa! I LOVE those two! Could they be more of a perfect couple? Great job on the pic!

huwahh... satoshi n risaa? awsomee! love those couple.
nicee wall there! huhahua..
keep on rockingg!