First woojo!
So beautiful!
I love it soo much!
Really cool doujinshi
Thanks for sharing

... did you really give it to sheila? x.x but very nice =D

she.is.just.lovely.
I love the way you made the hair. It has so much pormenor that a persion can just gaze at it for hours!
the clothes are great, so as the wings. I'm glad you did not paint it, or the effect would be not so good as in Black and white.
you should take more care about the hand and the leg, but in the middle of so much, there's nothing to fear in that case
as the body itself, it is just greatly done
just to say, if you made the shadowing on the clothes, you should have done it too in the skin. but I know that this way she looks more highlighted, and make sthe feeling she's shining!
I love it!

Hey, it's pretty nice! You have a good body's notion... very beautifull^^

wow, I like the expression of longing in her face, and the flowyness of the hair and wings. the leg position looks a bit off though. but overall, nice work!

Gorgeous! Well drawn, great contrast--really stands out. Facial expression is priceless and the details are exquisite ^_^