Hail everebody!
As a neophyte , this creation consists of one of my first :)
I did this doujinshi on behalf all people fonding for the Not reknown (at least in Canada)Elfen lied series and the
reason that egged me on the drawing of Lucy remains the fact she's the less insipid Elfen lied's personage.
T_T
As regards the wellspring of model for her, it came directly from the figment of my imagination. In consequence, you
never will grope for any screencap, image like this if not the one I'm showing to the community.
At last, I would fain receive at least some HARSH comments in order to meliorate my sleight of hand.
Given the fact I neglect myself thoughout time concerning my drawing capacity,you'll see only my innate capacity or
talent. ( Unfortunately, I prefer culture and sciences)
However, I'll reach the everest, id est, upgrade my competence. :(
Probably , unless I have no available time at all, enhancements of this doujinshi will be proceeded.
~_~
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Haha if you really wanted comments on your drawing you would of been better off posting it in the Sandbox instead of going person to person posting in there GBS ^_^.
but hmm your drawing is really good but you shouldn't of asked me for tips ^_^ I like to draw but I'm not the best you'd be better off visiting my gallerie and giving me tips ^_^.
and if you really like doujins you should join the doujinshi group ^_^.
but yea good job ^_^.
Considreing my own level of drawing skills I probably shouldn't say anyting but since you asked. I think it's
pretty good. Body proportions are good and nice face exprission. ^_^ But one can always get better - practice makes
perfekt - you know?
If I had to say anyting in particular then I'd say use a litte more shading when you colour. Never be afraid of the
shadows. ^_^
hm... what can I say?... good job dude! ^__^
at the beginning i tought that this green hat was a chicken... 
damn... i'm stupid... anyway, this is nice pic, +fav from me.
keep it up dude and I want to see more of your doujins or scans or something else great work
Heh pretty good, even tho im not that great at drawing... just want to say that the colouring could use abit of work... sry if I sound like a jerk >.> but keep up the good work =D
Eeeeeee.....i think.....
the hair is not enough soft...
anyway nice job! Keep it Up! :)
;)
well im not much of artist myself but i can consider myself as a critic.
first off she looks a bit manly. i was kind of confused on ur intentions at first. i suggest making her skiner and her mouth smaller.
the hands and body sturture r very good other wise. but the arms r diffrent length. and the hat seems like you put it on after u drew the picture.
also you should try and get a better coloring program... adobe photo shop is very nice but expensive make sure ur really into art before u pay the money.
keep trying this is a very good atempt! im excited to see ur progrestion!
maxx
Sorry for the late reply for your request =X
I think they told what I wanted to say ..ah I think u should put some shadow (arms, leg) that's all keep it up :)
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