This is actually quite nice because you got the background and scan right. The only things I'll probably mention is
the colour of the background and the lighting- it could have been a bit darker- and the quality of the background (it
looks a bit filtered... so I can't really make out the details or the quality). If it was darker that probably
would help the quality a bit, but I'm not too sure on that one. The last thing is the text, because it's eye
poking and the orientation is awkward. I'd move it closer to the character and have the text on one line, or on 2
lines in a centred paragraph- not an indented-like way that it is now :)
It's good work, and the extraction is clean. Kudos ^^
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Seven or eight layers; about 5 hours or so. I wasnt sure how this wall was going to come out, but im quite satisfied
with the result. Please give suggestions so i can improve my work. I really want to become better at this!
-not sure what the character is from, but i found the scan here on MT
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kuroimisa Retired Moderator Apr 16, 2006
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Kiako Apr 16, 2006
nice wallpaper, the background looks very good and the chara fits in well
keep it up -
himurakenshin Apr 16, 2006
Nice one, I think the colors are wonderful
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Devildude Apr 16, 2006
Quote by kuroimisaThis is actually quite nice because you got the background and scan right. The only things I'll probably mention is the colour of the background and the lighting- it could have been a bit darker- and the quality of the background (it looks a bit filtered... so I can't really make out the details or the quality). If it was darker that probably would help the quality a bit, but I'm not too sure on that one. The last thing is the text, because it's eye poking and the orientation is awkward. I'd move it closer to the character and have the text on one line, or on 2 lines in a centred paragraph- not an indented-like way that it is now :)
It's good work, and the extraction is clean. Kudos ^^I must agree, the only thing here that spoils it is the color of the background, would have benefitted well if you take care of those nit picks pointed out. XD
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