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s-CRY-ed: I Look Up to the Heavens

s-CRY-ed, Scheris Adjani, Member Art
s-CRY-ed Series Scheris Adjani Character Member Art Source

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Artist Comment

Waaah, I'm back with a new doujin. xD
This one's featuring Scheris from s-CRY-ed. And it's my first s-CRY-ed doujin with a bg.
Well, I drew this up for my great friend Ladyai
It's her birthday tomorrow, and so I decided to give her an early b-day present.
Anyway, about the drawing.
It took me about 5 hours. Mainly because of the background, and I think I may have over done it with the bg. I feel it's too cluttered in a sense. Like it distracts you from Scheris herself. I guess this is what I get for getting too close to the doujin when I draw it. -_-'
As you can see, I put alot of effort and detail on as many things as possible which may be why I think it's too cluttered.
Oh and the tree is kinda ghetto too. It didn't come out exactly the way I wanted. OX
All I hope is that it's not too bad and that you all enjoy.
Please comment, critique, and leave tips.
Oh and by the way,
Happy Birthday Ladyai-chan. ^^

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Comments

  1. unicorn2006 Retired Moderator Apr 09, 2006

    It's nice to see that you've put a great deal of effort into this piece. I haven't watched Scryed and thus can't really speak for the character, but I do like the sense of the blowing wind that nicely complements the character's pose. I think what makes the tree a little odd is that the trunk appears to get thicker as it goes up, and the falling leaves could have been a little more dramatic (the leaves look like they're just falling, with not much of the wind coming from the left).

    Anyway, this one caught my eye and so I came to comment. ^^ It's very nice of you to give this as a gift to your friend.

  2. zuuti Banned Member Apr 09, 2006

    yo nice work over all bot the first thing i seen is the eye it creps me out man i think u shude keep the head looking down or something bot the drawing is amzing i like the bg to very nice work

  3. uchiha-vegeta Apr 09, 2006

    wow , to even have a comment from a mod , ur works are REALLY GOOD!

    and happy b'day ladyai-chan ^^ , its good to see that u care bro

  4. ladyai Apr 09, 2006

    Wow it's amazing! I love it. I can tell you worked really hard on it. It must have took you awhile. I love how you created wind in the picture. The details are great. Thanks for the really great b-day present.

    Ja ne Yamichi ^_^

  5. Chloe Retired Moderator Apr 09, 2006

    Really well done!
    The shading is awesome and the bg is really cool!
    Keep up the awesome work!

  6. xianghua Apr 09, 2006

    Another great drawing Alfonse!
    The scenery is very nice! I like the tree^_^
    The character is ok too shading is good :)
    Great work! Hope to see more!

    ~*Meer*~

  7. LeeClow Apr 09, 2006

    WOW!
    I am really really impressed with this one.
    I thought it was good before you added the bg, but it is way better now. :D
    Oh. And Happy b-day Ladyai, and its good to see you liked it. ^_^
    Keep it up boy. :P

  8. UchihaTaijiya Apr 10, 2006

    Wow Alfonse, amazing work! I think you've improved!
    For one, the character looks great! The clothing folds, the proportions, and the shading are all really well done. I think the background looks awesome, you did wonderful on the grass, and the grass that's being carried away by the wind. Like someone else mentioned, I do think the leaves should fall more into the wind, but they look good to me. ^~
    The trunk of the tree should be larger, but you did well I think because I've never even bothered to draw a tree. >< And backgrounds are like... evil or something lol. But I really like yours! ^^
    And her eye, like someone else also mentioned, should be a little higher, closer to her nose... which does slightly throw off the proportions of her face, if you look at it long enough, but overall I think you did excellent. And your effort shows through. Keep it up Al-kun! <3

  9. A-10hybrid Mute Member Apr 11, 2006

    It gets better here. Great work Alphose. Keep it up as always. You know you got talent so you know the deal.

  10. fredsmart Apr 14, 2006

    Very Great This is very nice I like it added it to my favourits and downloaded THANK YOU

  11. Hanazaki Apr 14, 2006

    Yo, Alfonse-kun. sorry for the late comment. :) O.k....I think you're getting good in your drawing. This one has the 'feeling.' One thing is that it would be better if you can play with the shadow or some shaded area. Anyway, keep up the good work.

  12. Midori-chan Apr 16, 2006

    hey alfonse-kun! ^^
    your doujinshis are getting better! XD
    the chara is great and the bg is awesome!
    only the tree needs to be darker and it needs more shading^^
    other than that, it's a great piece of artwork! XD

  13. Kouta-domo Apr 25, 2006

    Hi Alfonse.
    it's been a while since i last saw u.
    by the way great wall.
    lots of detail. :)

  14. Shinobigoe May 24, 2006

    You totally captured the movement in the bg! Nice composition too! XD Way to Go!

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