hmm .. it's not bad for your first try :) actually it's much better than the way you describe it ^_^' just that there's still room for improvements. like i'd prefer if the outlines look a bit darker. and it'd be nice if you shade it a lil :D the the face/hair (not sure which) ish a lil out of shape but it's not a biggiiee deal. plus you definitely draw better than meh ^_^' keep it up christine :)

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Well....this ish mah very first doujin i submitted >< pretty ugly....but then don't expect much from me i am not a good artist took me 3 hours to make things right ^^;; anyway...i did mah bestest i hope u'll like it ^^
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chibi-lizard Mar 28, 2006
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enchantressinthedark Apr 01, 2006
Nah...its okay ^_^ Looks good to me ^_^ I can't draw anime characters out..because if I do, it'll suck like hell >_< Well anyways, his eyes ish like erm...too rectangular shape..and his fingers are lil long XD Ish it originally like that? ^_^' Well, other than that, everything seems okay to me ^_^ Keep it up!
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