Well well, It seems every doujin we see gets a little better.
Really nice and i couldnt even find any mistakes. xP
Well, i await your next submission.
See ya

Great doujin. There are almost no mistakes like LC said. Its a good detailed doujin.

Yay - I love Trigun - and Vash is such a lovable character. I'm sure your friend at school will love this!

The gun contains a lot of great detail - it almost looks like real metal and shiny - it's really impressive, same goes with Vash's hair, although I think it is a little too wide... if you know what I mean...

Otherwise another great doujinshi by you Alfonse

IMO, i think it's best if you try out the different grades of pencils like 4b, 6b, or even 8b. right now, i think you're using 2B for the whole artwork. i don't see any mistakes however, but i think you should use a ruler for the gun.

DUDE! this is awesome , love the way u drew him , excellent job bro ^_^

Wow this is amazing Yamichi! The shading on the glove is great! Keep up the really great work. I can't wait to see your next drawing.

Ja ne ^_^

Very nice Alfonse! Its really amazing! I cant draw a gun as perfectly as you can! lol
The hair is very well done and the shading is awesome!
The hands arent bad either!

And i want to say thank for your comment on my wall ~*Magical Harp*~ (i couldnt post on your page cz their was smth wrong .Gomen)
Yeah the scan wasnt very good i saw that maybe because of the layers^^'

Well cant wait for your new submission!
Take care! ^.^

~*Meer*~

Yay for Vash!
This is really well done. The gun is awesome and I really like the shading. Keep up the great work!

Wow good job.
Looks like the real vash in the manga. =)
The shading must have taken forever.

hello alfonse-kun! i missed you and your work a lot!
i've been soooo busy with exams and camps untill i don't have enough time to rest
back to the doujin --------->

vash looked so cool!
the gun is really nice and the shadings are great too^^
overall it's a great doujinshi
maybe i should try to change my style [ traditional samurai warriors ] to another new style [ modern hero with guns ]
lolz

Wow, how are you so good at drawing?!?!?! I love the way you did the hair, and the gun is awesome! Keep it up!

dud how the hell did u do all that i love it it's the best one u made its a fav dud i love trygun and the gun work of art man u out did ur self glad ur a friend of min lol bot ya man i got to say this is the best i seen yet hope u will do some more trygun drawings for me to see bot keeep up the good work zuuti out.

Excellent doujin Alfonse! Mistakes? I don't see any mistakes that really stand out... great job on the proportions and the lines-- so nice and clean! I especially like how you did his eyes and the shading on his hand and the gun!

And from what another member stated, you didn't use a ruler on the gun? Wow! I wish I could draw straight lines like those without a ruler! Keep up the great work!

Hmmm...nice job!
It's pretty good!
Heh, I love Trigun!
And Vash is so funny!
Heh...
Anyways, great job!
Keep it up!

First off, amazing concept ::huggles Vash:: <3 Okay, the fangirl in me has expressed herself...
The shading is excellent and the whole picture looks really good!
The mistakes that I find are his hand (though it looks good) is too large, the rims of his glasses (though really, I've never drawn glasses lol) and I think his widow's peak expands a little too far, his nose should be a little more to the left maybe? hmm, and I think his cheeks are a bit unproportional... but really, none of this even detracts from the picture or stands out... which means you're getting better! ^^
You're gun looks amazing imo (like your Gundams, you're good at drawing mechanical stuff) I bet you could draw a motorcycle really well. ^^ Keep up the awesome work, okay!

I still think Our Biology teacher could look just like this if she spiked her hair :P
Nice drawing

Wow, I like the detail and work you put into this; great job, even with the so-called mistakes.

I agree with you all, it's a verry good drawing I like it a lot! You did a great job, and I think you're verry talented Keep it up! Greetings ^__^