not bad, I think I like it a lot. you improved your drawings skills too.

heck it's pretty good and really neat. i like it alot i love the pose really great!

Erm.... You should buy the appropriate tools to draw the moon. so it look sphera, avoid using free hand to draw something that will spoil the background.
I think the right face shape is running off a little bit, make it didn't match the left face.
Erm, You should be carefull with your line especially the line that specify the hair. But never mind, it still look good but try to correct the line on top of the head.
Nice pose. You improve alot... ganbate!

Nice...Your drawing has improved.
I'll nvr get the patience to shade it though...

Aw, very cool!
The character looks awesome and I love what she's wearing :P
All in all, great job!

Ooo! Looks great! Nice shading. Me like. Well great work!

awesome!

wow nice drawing, i like the shading and lighting, something i'm not that good at.

whee, great doujinshi ^^ The shading looks a bit unreal, but it's still good ^^

It looks so professional! *_*
The shading is great, and I love how you made her hair! ^-^
You're very skilled, congrats!

Very well done ^^ I like the eyes <3

i agree with devildude, your getting better at this, not to say your past work wasn't already great. nicely done.

nice drawing and shading^^ u're improving....LOL..at first I thought it was the pck and jb group... :P hafta check my eyesight..
nice details..though a little rough

wow u're still so good at it since er... 3 years ago

Thank you so much for this great picture of my love Akesato. You definetely have talent. Please do not take this small critism to heart but the only part of the drawing I have aproblem with is her eyes. Her eyes in the manga are like this but in the series her eyes are softer, more round and not quite so sad. But that is just a small critic. Over all it is fantastic and I would like your permission to down-loaded it and frame it. Thank you again

OMG! Nice drawing! ^_______^ Very pretty and I like the shading of the clothes ^^ Thanks for sharing

@_@ You drew that?! Ugh! Not fair! I wish I could draw like that. You should make a manga series. Big money. -.^ I wish I could. Anyway she is really pretty. Keep 'em coming hun.

yes you have improve a lot. Amazing art, and wow.. she is hot. *haha* well good job.

Nyaaa...its such a cool doujin ^_^ You really have improved ^_^ Keep it up!

whoa! the drawing is so cool!
i like it a lot! you should've draw more doujinshis next time
the moon is a little weird other than that it's great!

Thanks to submit here

Rikka .... Nice draw you always think in english but your cool walls talk by themsefl

cool !
great job in the sahding ! wah ! u really good in drawing !
but the girl kinda sexy dont u think ?

that is a very cute looking drawing. nice shading job and just beautiful picture. ^___^ good work. ^___^