cute, kawaii.. good figure/proportions... :) she looks so happy as if she's skipping in glee.. XD ..kung may pera lang ako ma aaddict din akong mag shopping.. x_x
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...of shopping that is. *sigh* don't wanna say anything today. thanks for viewing guys. forgive the bg.
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chisaikame Mar 18, 2006
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julian1 Mar 18, 2006
i think she looks... fat. and her left arm looks a bit too small for her. and there's something not right about her boobs, i dunno. sorry if it's too much critique for one submission, nostyle.
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pegassuss Mar 18, 2006
mmm :\ no, I don't think she looks fat ... she actually looks thin, her waist, arms and legs are thin. And I love her expression =) it's so sweet! really cute, you did a nice job on her eye. And I also really like her hair, nice! You did a good job on proportions and creating movement, I like the foldings on her skirt, not bad and the way you drew her right hand and you did a nice job with the shading. I would also like to point out two things: there is something wrong on the position of her left arm, the movement of her shoulder is not right. It seems it's going to be straight but it is moving (am i making sense to you? sorry if I'm not ^^' ) and I also think it's a bit too thin for her ^^' and there is something wrong with her breasts, the middle line should be erased. In order to create depth you should add shading instead of that line, it'll make her look better, adding some more foldings and shadings on her shirt will do ;)
Overall, it's a very nice drawing and she looks really really cute ^__^ and ok, I'll forgive the bg XD *lol* Keep it up nosty-kun! ^.^ Why does she have a band-aid on her cheek by the way? oh! I understand to go bargain hunting can be dangerous XD *lol* -
SilentNymph Mar 18, 2006
I also don't find her fat ( and even if she were - fat people do exist and drawings with them can be really beautiful when well done) but her left arn is too thin and it doesn't turn quite well for the pose you chose. The folds of her skirt aren't that natural also.
Other then that I find her well proportioned , rather cute and she would have been even better with a little more shadeing.
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julian1 Mar 23, 2006
hm... well, now that i think about it, she ain't fat, only the arm's a bit thinner, which gives me that kind of contrast, making her look fat to me...
about the breasts, well, it's personal, cos' i don't really like big ones. nothing wrong about that really.
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pegassuss Mar 23, 2006
Hey, that's much better nosty ^^ I like it now better. I would just add a bit more shading though XD (peg the shading crazy XD ) Anyway, (about the arm, sorry I couldn't explain myself >__< I meant, the way the bone moves is not right, but just ignore me XP it's a tiny thing ;) ) Keep up the good work! ^^
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sumimasen Mar 26, 2006
kudos on that hand, it's fits and even adds to the atmosphere of the drawing!
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KaoriHime Jun 13, 2006
Wau,you can draw really awesome,*add to fav* ^_^ Great ^^
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