! its A-MA-ZIN!...
really!.. its perfect...
the water into the pool, the toy in her hand(i dont know how to call it.. in portuguese we call it "fantoche" xDDD), her eyes, face, body, everything is perfect!..
those clouds are great too!.. (i dont know how to draw cloud xDD.. but some day i'll learn hahhaha)
oh.. i like very much the idea of doing animals form in the clouds... this is very fun to do while watchin the sky!... (i do this since i was a little kid.. and continue to do now hahahaha).... its really beautifull!..
the colors u've chosen are amazin!... and the girl look really sweet.. as the original from chisana-sama.. ^^
i really dont think that i hav to say something that u need to improve.. but the only things that's a very little weird.. is at the bottom right of the poll.. i think that if there hav more clouds it would look better... maybe cause in the other side u've put more clouds ^^... but.. that dont really bother me.. ^^ its only a little.. very little detail...
as i said.. for me.. its perfect... the lineart too!..
amazin job!...

haha i take a lot of time on my works too...
see ya... ^^

I think there should be nothing wrong with the drawings, its perfect. I really like the way how you insert stuff animals or animals in your drawings, it looks really cute.
Although there is nothing wrong with the drawing, there is still some part which u can improve on. For example the colour i see only have 2 toning for each base colour, which is the base colour and a darker colour. For some parts you might have 3 like the hair or the water. Try to make 1 more toning, for example i make 4 toning for my hair. Whether its darker or lighter tone is up to you. And try to make reflection from the bg. For example your bg is blue, so u might wan to make a little highlights on the char with a very low opacity of blue shadings on it.

Waiii Flower-chaaaan!
I looove it so much! I'm so glad you finished it,m I knew it'll be perfect, and it is just as I expected! It's so cute! Better than mine!
The coloring is absolutely gorgeous, it's so smooth and soft, it's really pretty! ^_^
And the little and puppet is really adorable! And her doggy-bag too =D
I lover the bg too! It's so pretty and you wroked a lot with it! TT__TT I'm so happy that I have a friend like you! You put a lot of effort in it, and it really shows, everything is so perfect!
I will love you forever Flower-chan! *big panda hug* ~^_^~
Thank you so much for the wonderful gift! <33 <333 <3333

hehe, i wonder why it looks kinda familiar... it's chisana's aori... and you did that her way too, she always had clouds as the bg. and the way she holds up the puppet is really cute (wait... puppet? gives me an idea...). nice goin' flower-chan!

ps: when will someone do a fanart of my Elle...?

dangg.... that was one good full view... the colors are so refreshing... it does give that innocent feel to it.. superb coloring.. honto ni.. every part just stands out that it looks solid, like her hair.. and cleanly rendered! awesome ..just like a pro..

Hiya flower-chan! Sugoi na! The CG is fantastic. Kawaii drawing. She somehow reminds me of orihime from bleach with those new mod soul in puppet form. Awsome work I can say. 10/10.

so now i take some breakfast time to notice you (how always) i like your work very much. very fantastic cg work done. good colors used and everything is good looking (chara and background). love the idea with the (animal) looking clouds .. !

this work is so cute and very nice
i see a lot detail work keep it up

aww! So cute! xD
Actually, I have nothing to critique about it because you draw girls much better than I do! =D
Keep up the great work! =
D

oops, forgot something. +fav.

Ooo amazing cg again, Flower-chan~!
the lineart, colouring, even the background are excellent
love the clouds with animal shapes
very, very well done~!
btw, is that a dog and a flower down there? :O

It is somehow a bit surrealistic and mysterious. I am not sure whether the blue area around the character is water or sky because the white things in it could be water-elements or clouds. Really interesting. The feet that are not inside the water indicate that the scene takes place in the sky, right?
The colouring itself is very good and the outlines are carefully done as well.

Flowerdogg! o.O the sky is extremely creative and cool! I love the idea of the pic - it is fantastic! Excellent job with the CG, and it's nice to see you are keeping up with the works! Hope to see you around.

Ooh... what the..? I forgot to add it to my favs? I'm such a baka, gomen Flower-chan! I just noticed it

This has an interesting perspective. I like the fountain in the sky idea but the perpective of the drain in the pool is a lil off. However, the design for the fountain is really neat and I like the contours. Love the puppet. It was really well designed. The girl is really cute and this is really well drawn. The clouds are really fun to look at as well. Really pretty work.

aww, that is so uberly cute. *hugs it* ^___^ I think you did a very wonderful job on it and it is very very cute job that u did *nos nods* ^___^

I like the rubber boat, lol. Colouring and shadowing is fine but comparing the characters, I'd have to say your originals are much better. (In my oppinion)

i havn't seen this one yet...sorry.

i like the title..
since the time that mankind lost/lose innocence wars began and that is very very bad for our own world.

i love this drawing too