! its A-MA-ZIN!...
really!.. its perfect...
the water into the pool, the toy in her hand(i dont know how to call it.. in portuguese we call it "fantoche"
xDDD), her eyes, face, body, everything is perfect!..
those clouds are great too!.. (i dont know how to draw cloud xDD.. but some day i'll learn hahhaha)
oh.. i like very much the idea of doing animals form in the clouds... this is very fun to do while watchin the sky!...
(i do this since i was a little kid.. and continue to do now hahahaha).... its really beautifull!..
the colors u've chosen are amazin!... and the girl look really sweet.. as the original from chisana-sama.. ^^
i really dont think that i hav to say something that u need to improve.. but the only things that's a very little
weird.. is at the bottom right of the poll.. i think that if there hav more clouds it would look better... maybe cause
in the other side u've put more clouds ^^... but.. that dont really bother me.. ^^ its only a little.. very little
detail...
as i said.. for me.. its perfect... the lineart too!..
amazin job!...
haha i take a lot of time on my works too...
see ya... ^^