Original Doujinshi
Black Flame... standing by...
Black Flame... standing by...
By julian1
- Submitted:
- 2y 27wk ago by julian1
- Category:
- Original
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- Type:
- Doujinshi
- Resolution:
- 1,163x1,636
- Size:
- 385 kB
- Views/Downloads:
- 404/15
- Comments/Favorites:
- 12/8
this is for the universal manga project. it's what i pictured to be rain in his berserk form...
as you can see, there's a lot of similarities to sephiroth. he's supposed to have black hair, but his clothes are all black now... i'll leave it to the other mods.
there's a difference, however. see all the swords? instead of wings, he has floating swords at his back, which he can use in battle, switching them on the fly. each sword has a different symbol, different design. cool, huh? in fact, those are math symbols: alpha, beta, delta....
i suck at inking, hope you all don't mind. ok, i need comments on this...
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fantastic art
you are really good at drawing..you know that?This character kinda reminds me of sesshoumaru ^_^ anyway great Job
ooo pretty frickin sweet you should make good competition in this vote. woot woot!
I'll say this: I love the pic itself, however when it comes to UMP, it seems kinda... odd... I mean, why would his clothes change?
The swords idea is original, but seems a little unfitting...
However, I'll repeat that the drawing itself rocks... and I'm just one of the UMP members, so it's not like what I say goes.
Great job.
Oh i like the way you drew the greek letter, it's very stylish
...
as Drak said and as i said in the UMP, i don't think the sword idea is
appropriate, but i think we could maybe keep the different letters (and the way
you made them) for the scrolls ne ? Like it could be on the scrolls !
As for the character himself, i think the hair's a bit too long, i'd have seen him with neck long hair... but the long white hair could go well with wint
.
The armor is nice, and since he's (maybe) the smith's apprentice, it could be good on him, though it looks rich... maybe something less luxurious would be better.
Oh and for colors, maybe you can just submit your stuff as you wish to color it, then we can make changes
Nice job anyway, i really like the concept of the tatoo and black eye !
This is a nice drawing Julian.
The design of the armor and the math symbols you decided to use are a unique idea. And you actually inked the drawing pretty well.
An original idea if I do say so myself.
Keep it up Julian
Very neat job Julian-kun.
I
see what you mean about Rain having similarities with Sephiroth (seem like you
are a Final Fantasy 7 fan too
).
Though you are still really original with the sword idea and your style is
original.
Your ink work actually looks good.
I
just thought this was really cool and original with your ideas. Awesome work
Julian-kun.
Your inking looks cool! And I like the concept of the swords and their symbols. Very potent concept and even potent with it being made with ink. I guess it is the stark contrast and that is what brings it out. I like how you add some variation with tight lines in the white and darker areas in the black.
Very good work and effort!
Nice douijin, the character really does look like sephirot
at
first I thought it was him 
But you did a really nice job, the swords are really nice and I do like the greek letters you wrote in such an elegant way. The design of his clothes is really good, I like his armor, it's really neat, and i think you did a great job inking this piece, it looks really good. Keep it up!
this is great. eh i suck at inking too. its all pixelated tho.. anyway youve been commenting my work so i figured id check out yours
heh! the swords look more like cloud's unique fenrir..cloud and sephy combined? not bad! the swords look ordinary though. still it is nice.
oohh very nice on the pose and overlapping forms. I do agree he looks a lot like Sephi, and the swords remind me of some Drakengard monster, but ah well
I
like your idea for the sowrds being different with the symbols, it'd be
interesting to see this guy animated. As for inking... hmm, maybe some shadows
under the hair on the face? What're you using, tech pens? Nib and quill are best
for getting varied-thickness lines