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Hello everybody
I'm back with a new doujin that I finished last week.
I drew this for my great friend, Ladyai, because she loves angels.
Anyway, about the drawing. It took me about 4-5 hours to draw. Reason being was because of the wings. It was a tedious
process drawing the wings.
And so I slacked off with the wings quite a bit, but I did get the job done.
The shading took me a while, especially on the wings.
I'm satisfied with the results, and I hope it goes the same with you all. ^^
Please leave comments, tips, and critiques for improvement.
No other submissions
She is the girl I used on my wallpaper, The World Beyond:
http://gallery.minitokyo.net/view/143020/
She is from a game called White Clarity. The drawing is good, though her arm gets a bit thin below the elbow. Her eyes also need a bit of work. They don't seem to have any life to them. The hair is good though.
wow that's an awesome drawing! the wings look so realistic! keep up the great work!
awww, it looked better in the smaller thumbnail...thought it was something from full moon wo sagashite...but gd try anyway
Very pretty Alfonse-kun!
Details show lots in this drawing!
The hair and wings are very pretty!
Great work! Keep it up!
*favs*
~*Meer*~
pretty good, al. but i think the arm's a bit thin again. but the shading's still good. very good job on the wings too.
if you can control the thickness of the lines, i think the picture will have a much more 3D effect. for now, your picture looks a bit too 2D.
Your best one yet, Al. I know it would be much better in color, but hey, its all good.
dude , u rock!
Wow It's so beautiful Yamichi. I love it. You drew the wings great. And I love the ribbon. Your the greatest Yamichi. Thanks soo much. I'm definataly adding it to my faves. Domo Arigato.
Ja ne Yamichi ^_^
Aw, very cute! Love the wings and the dress is awesome! Nicely done!
Hey look... a drawing. xD
Looks good man. Although, i have to agree with lunaregina, the eyes do look a little dead.
But other than that i love it, looks great mang.
Well, i'll sees you later.
Adios
all i got to say is WOW man good work i see u love art a lot man that's a good thing man very nice dud keep it up mab
You're getting better alfonse-kun. More work on the eyes though. Thnks for sharing this. Ganbatte!
My critiques are pretty much what others have said.
It's still a good doujinshi Al-kun! ^^ The wings are really lovely. Her eyes do need work, I'm just not
feeling the life or expression in them...her head may be a bit too large for her body, but everything is still drawn
well. ^^ Her clothes look good and so does her hair, except one strand, it doesn't seem to flow right, but its
nothing big. <3 Great work overall, I think she's pretty. She'd look nice colored in blue, but that's
just what pops into my head when I see her. :)
::waves:: Later!
whoa! alfonse-kun! the drawing is so nice! XD
the body proportions are great and the wings came out really good! it looks nice^^
he arms are a litle thin, other than that it's a great piece of artwork^^
great job alfonse-kun! ;)
Once again, +1 to your drawing skill ^_^
great one!
i have been looking your draws and you have improved a lot!
dont stop it :)
Waha! Great drawing! I realy love it. But, try to add some shadings to it. But other than that it realy is a knock out. ^_^'
great drawing, to ma fav's list....hehehehe...i visited your page, 'cause i liked your avatar...hehheheee :)
ill give you 9/10 cuz of the arm and eye. love the wing
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