Heya mister Nox ^_^
Well been a long time i haven't drop my two cents into one of your drawings ;), so here goes to make things up !
the first thing i noticed here is that his face is triangular with the peak backwards, which is weird cause it gives a
feeling of messed up proportions on the face... and it emphasises the nose which seems to be protuding too much.
About details, this is obviously a rough, i think it could be pretty good if cleaned and all ;). plus he's got a
hairstyle that's not seen very often, but i like that. his eye is a bit freaky too, like he's sleep deprived,
and it has a weird shape (slit pupil a bit).
anyway good to see some doujin artists i know once in a while XD. keep them coming !