Dude, if I could make hands like you...
This is awesome. The shading is wonderfully done and his expression is so sad :(
But I love Ed, so it's all good ;)
Excellent job, and I can't wait to see more!
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Artist Comment
Hey everybody.
It's me again, with another doujin...(not ready for colors yet)
This time I went ahead and made a doujin for FMA. About time too cause it's probably my fav anime. (yet I hardly
draw it)
Anyway, this doujin probably took about 3-4 hrs.
There's not much to say, but I am satisfied with the results. And I drew the FMA Emblem thing just for kicks...I
thought it kinda fit with the drawing. .::shrugs::.
The shading here's pretty good, and I did have a few mishaps here and there, but I'll let you figure 'em
out on your own.
Well, that about sums it up.
Please comment, critique, and leave tips for improvement. ^^
Thanks in advance.
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Chloe Retired Moderator Feb 06, 2006
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Kukuru Feb 06, 2006
Looks great:) I think Ed's left hand is slightly too thin other great job :) It looks very much Edo-kun, and your other art works look great as well:)
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uchiha-vegeta Feb 06, 2006
dude , ur amazing....
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Midori-chan Feb 06, 2006
wow alfonse-kun! you drew so many pictures! o_0
that's amazing! i barely had the time to draw.... T_T
yup yup, the shadings are good and i like the symbol^^
his expressions are good and i think the laft hand is a bit too thin. the legs are a little crooked ( the bottom part ). other than that it's a great drawing! ;)
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xianghua Feb 06, 2006
Beautiful Alfonse-kun!
Wow i gotta say this one ended up being very nice!
And as u said to me hands r ennemis!^^
The hands u did here r not that nice but its always good to try!
Shadows are ok and that thing u did at the top is very pretty! ( looks like a cute symbol!)
Anyways Great work Alfonse-kun as always!
Keep up the good work!~xianghua~
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UchihaTaijiya Feb 07, 2006
Ed is so awesome.
Looks good. ^^ I'd say though that his left hand is too thin... it seems like there isn't enough mass from where his pelvis area should be... his eyes aren't lined up...
But I really love the way you did his jacket. ^^ The shading looks great too. I haven't shaded anything in so long with pencils.... but anyway, I think it's pretty good and the Ed's symbol in the background looks awesome. Keep it up and check out my two newest doujinshi, okies? ::huggles::
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ladyai Feb 13, 2006
It looks great! Ed has so much emotion in his face. The link you gave me didn't work so I had to look you up. I'm glad I did though. Keep up the great work!
Ja ne ^_^
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lin1011 Feb 13, 2006
Wow! Fullmetal! Great work! His eyes are look very good and portrait his emotion nicely. The only thing that I can point out is that his left hand looks a little small.
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A-10hybrid Mute Member Feb 13, 2006
Another colorless doujin! *Still waits for colors* I still think your drawings are very nice. Ed would look up in the sky once in a while. His hand does look thin on the left (right when your looking at him) other than that it quite good.
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happygreendragonfly Feb 14, 2006
It looks great!
The left hand looks kinda funky.^__^
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zuuti Banned Member Feb 14, 2006
i like ur work bot the hands for me is off bot that's just me man dont get me wrong u have more love for drawing then me man im so bizzy thy's day's man nice drawing i like it keep it up man and u will make it way more cooler then every just keep it up
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kiokorenay703 Dec 30, 2006
pretty nicely done lov the sign in the corner, and the shading pretty good. nice job! ^^
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