I know a couple of other people said this, but it really is a little bit too bright- I think the background elements like the tree and the bridge would contrast a little bit better if the whole background were dimmed down a few notches.
There's no need to be so hard on yourself in your descriptions though- you're one of the better wallers here, your effort shows.
Oh, since nobody else said anything- minitokyo's mis-spelled in the signature.
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