Cool, first post!
I'm pretty impressed! I think the overall "blur" effect is pretty well done, and there's a very smooth transition from day to night at the top. Good job on Lacus' wings (I like wings too, wings just enhance any image they're put on, as long as they're done well).
The only thing that strikes me as odd is the mist in front of Kira and Athrun; it's the same thickness as the rest of the mist, and since Kira and Athrun are so much in the foreground, it makes sense that there'd be less mist between them and the stuff in the background. (Think like somebody in a fog cloud walking toward you- hope that makes sense.)
But minus that gripe, good job.
:pacman:
P.S. Did you mean "Wishing upon your Return" to be the whole title? Right now the gallery title's not showing up that way.