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Hi. I draw the two characters a few months ago when I wanted to try drawing people who are tired. I used the manga Slam Dunk to get ideas. So we have the little clouds, and those little vibration lines. I was a little disappointed about the way I inked it though. It could've been a little (or a lot) better.

The bg was drawn just today. Another bad bg of course. :sweat: But I tried to cram as much detail on the bg as I can (hopefully someone could see the UFO o_0). The clouds kinda suck though. I wanted to put some screentone in there (as most manga do) but for the life of me I can't find any tones here in the Philippines. Anyway, hope you guys like it.

PS Worthless info #1: The number 14 is the number of my favorite Slam Dunk character Mitsui Hisashi (I even created a website for this guy called BURN).

Worthless info #2: #14's shoe I copied from my sister's... while the other one I copied from Echizen Ryoma's in a manga of Prince of Tennis (POT has really detailed shoes which rules)

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Comments

  1. vodkamint Jan 08, 2006

    very nice! O_o
    Omg. You can draw so well! I envy you. T___T
    Great job! Keep it up! +fav

  2. Anjhurin Jan 08, 2006

    Hey you know what ? this is the most "manga-looking" doujinshi i've ever seen around.

    the shading's a bit rough though, and it would seem that the girl on the left has pants, her legs don't have any detail on them (you know they're like log :) )... you should have drawn the muscles form or something.
    their faces are really good, as well as their hair, i think it's the best part of this drawing along with the bg. i like how you put your sig in ^_^. i wonder though why there's so few spectators with these two beauties running ^_^' (and i can see the UFO lol)

    good job really !

  3. Acuni Jan 08, 2006

    not bad
    good scenary and the shadows you made there is great to but some things like the hands need work

  4. mika-chaaan Jan 08, 2006

    i think your drawing is great^_^. so keep drawing

  5. masterjesse89 Jan 08, 2006

    GREAT! as always.
    Why don't you like how you inked it?
    I dont see the "log leg" that person was talking about.
    Nice job on the tiredness.
    Nice faces. AND necks. and hair.

    Is that you sleeping there in the bleachers? The Ufo is cute. You like Pearl Jam?

    I need to go back to sleep now. Too Tired. *yawn* x_x x_x x_x

  6. chisaikame Jan 09, 2006

    oh oh... me likes this! ^_^ i agree with the previous posts, mukha nga silang pagod.. :) you captured it perfectly..! sayang hindi ko mapanod panod/matapos yung slamdunk na yun... katuwa pa naman si sakuragi. dyan naman ako mahina... conceptualization... low on ceativity... T_T oi.. pearl jam, pare... 'jeremy'? hekhekhek.. and yeah.. nakita ko ang ufo...! i get the cookie! ne? :D chipsahoy ang nais ko.. jk. :) and yeah, napansin ko ang iyong gb posts ay kung saan saan... :) dami mo na pala talgang kaibigan dito sa MT no? pede kang maging mr. friendly! ^_^' ang contender mo si papy-san! hehehe... oh wait wait, hindi nato comment sa drawing mo ah... >_< gomenasai! :)

    cge ingat and reply ko yung gb muh! :)

  7. dngo86 Jan 09, 2006

    The drawing looks fine to me. This is another nice original drawing. Can't wait to see your next one.

  8. KikichiSensei Banned Member Jan 13, 2006

    wow this is awesome!
    very nice drawing! Must be to my favs! ;)

  9. psychodeedee Jan 14, 2006

    your work is great XD
    wish i could do that :sweat:

  10. lonewolf89 Jan 20, 2006

    nice another awesomedrawing .. I like it along with your others as well..I'll put this one in my fav. :)

  11. sharley Jan 24, 2006

    Nice try. I think the eefects of *tired* characters are quite good.

  12. pegassuss Feb 16, 2006

    Another good drawing ^^ I really like this one and I must say the tired effect looks really good. I like the 'movement' of this drawing. And I think you should be proud of the bg, I think it looks really good, and the inking too, I don't know why you say you don't like it T.T
    The only weak point in this drawing (in my opinion) are the clouds ^_^' they look a bit messy but I love the little UFO XD so funny.
    I love the way you drew the characters, proportions are really good and I love the expressions on their faces and the movement of her hair.
    You also did a good work shading ;) I think you are improving a lot nosty-kun so keep it up!

  13. KaoriHime Jun 13, 2006

    Oo,you draw so damn good. *fav* ^_^

  14. Wapy Aug 18, 2006

    they are good.. the expression of the the left girl is the best... the bg... well, it's a bg, what to expect? the clouds aren't that bad... I like the shadowing effect on the girls! nice job.... there's a dude watchin there.... details... good work!

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