heyy.. very nice... i don't see any thing to point out, as the disproportionacy is what most mangakas do with er, mangas... ^_^'

cheers! :)

very cool :) nice drawing

I love the hair and the shading is nice too!
NICE! I cant think of anything else to say!
Keep it up! Cant wait to see more!

TaTa!
May the Spiff be with you!
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beautiful doujin venicequeen-san! everything looks perfect! you did an excellent job with the shading! this looks like it could be something out of an artbook or something! definitely a fav! keep up the great work! :D

Hmm. Not bad. Its good to see some good old pencil skills while everybody vectoring. The bow and the wrinkles are a little flat, but overall its pretty good. The detail in the hair works well, and I like the way the shading fades into the white of the page. *Adds to fav's*

This drawing is beautiful, nice work! I love the clothes.

Ty for the nice comments guys :D

This doujinshi is great.I like the shading in her clothes.Continuous!

excellant quality... soooooo many bleach doujins recently O_O
but this one is particularly good...

oh wow, so pretty! that is a very beautiful sketch that you did! its some very nice and fine work. and it looks really great to me. Hope you continue drawing and sharing more of your works. + to favs

great job! lol... I can see you are a big bleach fangirl for drawing all of ther character here... lol...
yet another gorgeous looking sketch over here...
you are very talented indeed..
nice work... and looks very hot too... ;)
give u a score of *9.75* and *Grade AAA+* for a wonderful piece of artwork!

very nice, a lot of details too.

it is very good, this one looks very close to the original, i think the only problem is with her hands, which kinda looks plasticky...i donna how, but it doesn't look like skin, u got to practice more on the tones and lines, well done.

Congratulations!
SHe relly look a lot like the original draw. That is very difficult to achieve, so I give you a lot of credit for this :)
And yes, you are right, she has a very big breast.

hi. very nice work. yeah like they said very close to the original. lol you make it sound as if the abnormal chests are a bad thing. ^__^ again, excellent job.

Oh my goodness... this is wonderful. I am in aww of you talent. This is a great piece of artwork. You really did deserve to win the contest. I congratulate you and hope that you will continue to share with us.

Congradulations on winning the Doujinshi-Club competition ;)
This is beautiful! Absolutely amazing, you have done an awesome job!
This should be highlighted...a definite fave, keep up the amazing work!
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~Animanga~

I watch your beautiful doujin of Matsumoto and i am Astonished!
You made her very good! I love they way you shadow her! ! !
Also lovely pose ! Very nice! ! ! ! Keep up the good work!

wow! how beautyfull drawing! it's very hard work! i'll ad to my favorite.tanks for sharing

Now this doujin looks really awesome! Like anojai said, you can see a lot of hard work there, and lol, you did this with the floorstander around eh?

excellent drawing keep up the hard work

beautiful artwork, lady venicequeen.. :)

+ favs

wow! nice! ^_^

it's a really close reproduction... good work~! :)