hello!
you've asked if i can visit your gallery so here i am. ^_^' i think you can draw.. :) that's a good expression you came up with for her... otoh, your familiarity with drawing anime (bodies, etc) is still inadequate. :) so i suggest practising more in copying many, many full-length animes, so later the image would've embedded itself in your mind, and very familiar to it, and draw much, more smoothly. Note on arms/hands and feet.. the partition on her legs are a bit too far, too. ^_^'
happy new year! XD
-chisai