Bon je fais le comment en anglais ^_^
Well first off, i'd say it's a nice drawing, the shading on the clothes is awesome. proportions and face are
alright :) . the colouring isn't bad either, though it's not very bright (but i guess that's a pencil
problem :) ... or your style)
the shading on her hands though is weird, and her fingers look a bit crooked. now i like the profile of her head
(it's a bit big ne?).
finally, i think there's a problem around her hip, like the folds suggesting her leg are making her butt seems
extra long, and twisted oddly too ^_^'
anyway good drawing, first coloured entry too.
au fait concours sa n'existe pas en english, c'est contest ;)
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