Bon je fais le comment en anglais ^_^
Well first off, i'd say it's a nice drawing, the shading on the clothes is awesome. proportions and face are alright :)
. the colouring isn't bad either, though it's not very bright (but i guess that's a pencil problem :) ... or your
style)
the shading on her hands though is weird, and her fingers look a bit crooked. now i like the profile of her head (it's a
bit big ne?).
finally, i think there's a problem around her hip, like the folds suggesting her leg are making her butt seems extra
long, and twisted oddly too ^_^'
anyway good drawing, first coloured entry too.
au fait concours sa n'existe pas en english, c'est contest ;)
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