good effort overall venicequeen-san! especially the shading! now for suggestions... his arm is too long from his elbow to his wrist... and his face looks too linear on the right side... as in too flat. but for your first attempt i'd say it's very good! keep it up! :D
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First ever submission :o! I know it's not very original, but it was my first attempt at doing a proper anime sketch. Feel free to add constructive criticism. ;)
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Beautiful crayon draw...Congratulaiton for your pieces...
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YAY kisuke!
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the shading's nice, but the arm looks kinda freaky (it's long, and BENT). other than that, there's nothing wrong with it...
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Its a good attempt on drawing Urahara oo" At least way better than what I can do n_n" Nice job still, hope to see some improvements next time~!
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the shading around his eyes might be just a touch too dark
merged: 07-24-2006 ~ 12:00am
the shading around his eyes might be just a touch too dark, other than that, and what people have already said, Great work, keep it up :D
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