Its okay...but the colour makes it look old...and ancient LOL the drawing is nice ^^ How i wish i would see her from in front ^^ keep up the good work!

the editing looks good but some stuff just looks a lil' out. one would be the left hand, it's not that bad but i think you and me can agree that it can be worked on, ne? both of her arms connecting to her shoulders, to me, looks weird. looks like she has some really tensed up shoulders or something. and i'm not sure whether it's just me, but rather than looking out for somebody, she looks more like she's dying from a heat stroke. lol.

I really like how you did her hair parted down the centre~^^ and like you said the sleeves and overall dress design is pretty. You've got great skills when it comes to graphic editing do its no surprise your CG looks awesome as well.

Hiya Yumi! This doujin is nice. Look kinda like poster outside those shopping mall inno. Very neat and clean. Well done.

Wow - a doujinshi from Yumi-chan. It's been a while ^^ You've been busy, apparently. I miss them.

It's very nice (even more than the hair and sleeves! ^^). There is a lot going on with the outfit, but not an excessive amount so that it becomes distracting (it isn't flooded with folds and shadows, for instance - which can sometimes be carried too far).

My only complaint (small one, and personal preference) is the background color at the top. It kind of dulls it down a little. Could I tell you a better way to have done it with this character? Er...no.

I really like the concept. The colors are nice and golden as well. Very pretty.

I love the picture, and I think you did a great job in choosing the colors as well
Very pretty

hey, nice drawing.
she is very nicely drawn and the texture looks really nice too.
nice job. ^_~

;-; wish this was a scan.. and i could wall it..
*JEALOUS*

It's nice ^_^
I like the color
but who is that in the picture ?
I got to know

Hmm..
your skills are getting better
but the right hand's a little out you see..she has a shoulder (ermm...just saying out what i think..but i don't think i can really draw perfectly as well~_~) while the left hand looks stiff ._. try doing her pose and you'll know
anyway,nice one

its BEAUTIFUL! love the colors and the draw itself cos its simple yet serene for some reason, needs a bg though but great job! :P

nice ^^
the porpotion(?) seems good ^^ << something i can't get right ... ><;;
great job ^^

are you sure this ish a doujin and not a scan ?

joking joking

it look reallie good ..

especially after the colors and textures

the only problem would be the left hand which look kinda big

anyway .. good one !

ooh, i love the colors and nice twitching with the lightings there, yumi-chan!
totally catchy at a first glance!
the way you parted her hair is lovely! *steals hair*
designs on her clothes are truly unique as well.. tho I have to agree with chibi-lizard that her left hand looks kinda big, but other than that, its an amazing piece!

worthy of a fav! *toggles*

Omigod..this is a very cool drawing..I really love the ambiance & coloring! must add to fav!

I saw this in your friendster picture bucket. And I LOVED it.
You draw really well, and that comic you made, <3~
Anyway, it's a good thing you CG-ed it, the former picture was a bit boring.
Keep up the good work! +fav

Nice work. The character looks pretty proportional.

Appreciate the effort put into this one. The back face of the character is always harder to draw as people seldom draw them. Keep it up!