Okay, I can't be bothered reading everyone else's comments... From the sounds of it, it's either, people love it, or
hate it... @_@
Vector :
You cell-shaded! *worships!* Cell-shading is like being stuck rolling that damned rock up the hill in Tarturus [Yes, I'm
still in Latin mode, so you expect some more random paraphrasing or referencing from my texts =)] So yeah! Good job on
actually bothering ^_^;
Only thing is that I kind of like smooth lines, if they're meant to be smooth... And I kind of feel like you got lazy
with the vector [Not surprised though] I mean, bits of her hair are a bit... Not bumpy... But like, slightly wonky?
*would explain this better if she were doing this in real life* Anyway, 'cause Chii's hair is freaky, whenever you see
it, it's always smooth, regardless of where she is... @_@ So err, just being a bit picky on that point...
Choice of Colour :
Yey for dark walls! It's like massively dark [Can massively be used in that context? *blank*] for me, so yeah, go the
Gothic-ness!
But I guess it's just me, but the purple really doesn't work with the pink that she's wearing... 'cause she's wearing a
warm pink, and the background has a cold purple... So it feels really weird... And yeah, black and warm pink don't go
together well either...
And uh, it kind of feels like you did the cheat darkness... @_@ You know, the layer of black at opacity 15%... Because
there isn't a kind of... Highlight anywhere? I know you were trying to make it dark, but uh I don't know... Because the
colours look like they have an overlay of this one kind of black, rather than varying shades of brown, which could
achieve the same kind of effect, without creating the dull kind of flat black...
Background :
Okay, I would get rid of the black line at the frame on the RHS of each of the frames... Because it looks like an
outline at the moment... Just make it a darker shade of the same brown you used for the frame in general... [Or is it
already a dark brown? Because it really looks too much like black... So if it's already brown, use a lighter
version]
Also, is it me, or is there a weird brown highlight-ish thing to the frame? At the top of the screen on the frames, you
can see *something* Since your posts don't actually END there, I can't understand why you did that...
Useability :
It's fine in terms of useability... I guess the only thing I have to complain about is the fact that the text is covered
by my icons... But yeah... My icons were originally covering Chii's face too, but they got moved... It's just, I don't
like moving my side icons... I don't mind the middle ones, because they're always going to be in the way of something...
But yes, the side ones... *makes stabbing motions at them*
Overall :
I didn't mean to uh, tear your wall to bits... @_@ I mean, I'm kind of not a Chobits fan... I like the CLAMP style, but
uh, Chobits... *goes far far away...*
However, I do like how you've worked with the Gothic theme, and it's definitely one of those walls you can actually
use... So I'll give you credit for that! *gives her thumbs up*
Err, and just noticed... But is that black mass behind Chii, her shadow? @_@ It's a bit... Oddly distributed... Like
there's too much at her head, and too little behind the rest of her...
- Tevi
P.S. You may ignore me... *twiddle*
P.P.S. Apparently I didn't have that many useful Latin references...
