It's quite a neat design, I must say. However, in my eyes, there are a few discrepancies. The texture in the foreground seems to overwhelm a lot of the background and the scan, and it kind of gave way to the empty composition on top (I'm not too sure though). The whiteness of the umbrella seems a bit overwhelming, not to mention that it lacks in some detail. This is where it's recommended you come in and add some flavor to that umbrella! The font of the text seems off to me, like the design doesn't really fit. A more grunge-type looking text would fit better for both the signature and the phrase on the bottom left. The colors match well, and the design overall is unique. ;)
Artist Comment
"Pease veiw the full version for all my little touches"
How i made this:
WHew this one took me a very long time ^_^' . First the character i had to do a flawless extraction. Then i had to
create her dess that long... if u don't believe me on that part u can look at the orginal scan here at mt. Also
with my love of blushing i added some blush to her face and made her a little more endowed "points at her
chest" hehehe XP
Next i had to cut the dress to where it fit into the bridge... but still left the grass showing over it... kinda tough
lol. Then i added in rain "notices the streaks" some sparkles and then my purddi peach burdies :). Then i had
to change the colors of the character all around by duplicting her and overlaying at a certain opacity and changing the
levels. then i did the same thing to the bg adding a cool dark effect at the bottom and light at the top. Next was
texturing the image... i first added a texture to the character "had to select twice cause seperate the characters
dress from the main body so i could shoe the grass on the bridge" this a added a crackling effect to the character.
Then i added a second texture to the bg that made a burlap effect to the bg. then i verlayed the entire thing with one
of my favorite textures that really brung eveything together. added in text and bamm! it was done ^_^. THis is the exact
procedure that i used. several several hours of non stop work.
I truly hope taht you enjoy my work... and if there is something you do not find to your liking and would like me to fix it for you. Then tell me and i will make a special copy for you ^_^. I enjoy my works and i enjoy making them for all my friends!
As always comment and enjoy!
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SilentMasamune Nov 09, 2005
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Rhonda21 Nov 09, 2005
like the darkish effect. looks cool. the texture is nice as well. like the birds as well. though the umbrella is really really bright and looks a little different then everything else but over all it still looks great. Nice Work!
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Michelle Nov 09, 2005
Nice wallpaper.
I like it.
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Ryoutou Nov 10, 2005
I'm feeling fine~
I like it~ -
knightstar3 Nov 10, 2005
this is very nice! ^^
the texture gives it this kind of snowstorm feeling.
'awaiting love' is a perfect title for it! :) -
Akira-san Nov 10, 2005
Wow!
Liked so much the texture you added on image and scan, it looks like an old paint and brings a sad feeling too, the colors are great... but I need agree to SilentMasamune about the text, you should replace it with a gruge-type... Think it will fit better, too.
Well, I really want to fav it cause I liked it so much hehe ^^ -
Staff Nov 10, 2005
Oo nice grainy texture. The transparency reminds me of my pinhole-camera pictures. Very well done.
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kenny52690 Mute Member Nov 10, 2005
looks nice! your skill is getting better^^
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melonbrust Nov 10, 2005
need to pick other font, but still a good wall
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Milkiyo Nov 10, 2005
lovely bg but the words are kinda big 0.o
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OracleAngel Retired Moderator Nov 10, 2005
Pretty neat on how you use the textures and the blending of the image to the bg itself. One problem is mostly the funny cross brush somewhere around the main character... seems too distracting plus the texture itself look a bit too much.... try overlaying some black grunge effects at the bottom of the grasses. ANyway keep it up mate! :P
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lthnadml Nov 10, 2005
Retty nice work . . . looks like an old painting . . . very beautiful bg and nice colors too . . . You have done a lovely work . . . XD XD XD
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LhC Nov 10, 2005
really cute wallpaper....is really nice idea as well! thanks for sharing...*kawaii ne~
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SealedSword Nov 10, 2005
I love the texture of on the wall XD
You make really good unique wallpapers you know =P
Keep it up! = ) -
iiwa Nov 10, 2005
ooooh! i likey this one!
it gives out a serene feeling.. :D
this wallie is totally different from many ive seen and i just.. love it! XD *kyaaah*
the cute little effects are awesome ne jade! :nya:a total fav! ;)
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Dejiko-chan Nov 10, 2005
Nyaaah ! It's so... good *.* ! I like it X3
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quantixar Nov 11, 2005
Really nice wallpaper. This is how wallpapers should be. Me like!
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Emma Nov 12, 2005
Very nice and different wall. I like the graininess and the white-wash effect. The poem is such a great touch too ^^ Well done!
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chingetscook Nov 12, 2005
Nice gritty texture effects, I like the way the texture helps maintain a smooth transition from light to dark from the top to the bottom. The walking in the mist feel of the wall sets a great mood.
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dusk Nov 20, 2005
pretty gritty, gives it a misty feel, the text could be better, but thats just my preference =)
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RNA072100 Nov 24, 2005
i like this one too! misha fitx well into the pic! *^-^* A JOB WELL DONE!
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happygreendragonfly Dec 26, 2005
WOW! LOVES!
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pixelboy Jan 09, 2006
that looks pretty cool. the pic is very cute. nice !
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Melisandre Sep 27, 2006
Delicate and peaceful!
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