well the shadow of the chara is disturbing.
now the charas arm looks too fat and his hands are too short.
Artist Comment
Okay, I had to revise it some. I think that it looks loads better now. I drew the character about two years ago for a scratch art that didn' t look to great. . .But hey, this wallpaper looks okay. Well, let me know what you think!
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Kiako Nov 08, 2005
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k1ru Nov 08, 2005
nice doujin, but i dont really like d chara... ^^ *same comment as kiako*
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SilentMasamune Nov 09, 2005
Wee, my first comment on a wallpaper of yours! Okay, let's see, the background was totally a simple creation because you only used either the ripple, ocean ripple, or glass effects. I know that the text face is not the best in this wallpaper; perhaps a more fitting font of the guy's personality will work (like maybe a sharp font with twists or something). The character is nice too, but I think that the background should be altered so that it has the same texture as the character, or if you want the character to have a softer texture to just vector the character and leave the background as is. Otherwise, not a bad job for your first attempt at a background. I was the same way, trust me. ^_^
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MidnightMiko Nov 11, 2005
Cool looking character design, a warrior elf! ^0^ The clothing design is pretty cool too, great job on the cape! His sword is so awsome, you did a really good job on it! The background is pretty simple, but it still looks good! Great work, thanks alot for sharing! ^_^
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