From what I can see, it looks alright, but he color of the picture makes it very hard to see on a white background. There isn't enough contrast to the background.

I did see you tried to upload it again (and it's presently offlined). Don't know if that fixes it or not. From squinting at it, it looks nice enough, but very hard to see.

*clicks to enlarge* ^_^ I can see it much better now. You drew all her curves very nicely, it is a bit hard to make out the hand but it's not a big deal. The girls really pretty. The dress is gorgeous and I like the flower in her hair. The serpent looks really awsome, good job on drawing all the little scales. I think it's a cool drawing. Hope you can find time to draw more soon, but until then thanks for sharing! ^_^

I am not that happy with the medium you used for the outlines because some details get lost with the rough structure. The drawing itself is pretty and the snake's good as well. And... the apple tastes good xD

It's really nice^^ The snake is really great! Great job!
Hands are always so hard to draw

She looks blue and scary. O_O But you've made your effort and it's actually quite nice if it wasn't so blue. The overall thing also looks a bit watery, and the snake looks scary. Great job, and keep up the good work!

I like it overall... maybe except her face which came out a bit weird to me.
The snake looks cool though.
Guess it's somewhat Eve, right?
Nice job and a fav from me.