That is a very original wall. I don't think that I ever would have thought to put Belldandy and Keichi (sorry if I massacred the spelling) on a grungy looking wallpaper. It works really well. I like how you've blended the characters into the white of the bottom part of the wallpaper. Keichi's hair blends in a little too much with the background due to all the textures, but I like the texture, so I really don't have a suggestion as to how to differenciate. Even though the text is white I think it looks fine with the subtle outline around it. It looks a little odd on the thumbnail, but on the wall itself it's fine. Though I would suggest maybe giving the same treatment to the script above and even to the design below the print text. I can't quite tell what the last word is. Maybe adding a slight shadow behind the text would help distinguish it from the background as well. Overall I really like your wall and think everything is very well composed. I still like the fact that this is Belldandy in grunge! :D Great work! Kudos!
1600x1200 Wallpaper
Artist Comment
(Okay. So, let's try this new system out, and see how it's doing.)
This is my most recent creation - and a sequence of sorts of a previous Ah! Megamisama wallpaper of mine. Since I haven't submitted any walls for critique in a few months, I've grown potentially rusty and lazy; therefore, as, per now, I have little confidence in my own quality sense, I welcome constructive criticism.
One known issue: this first line of text is quite unreadable, I know. However, notice it's in an area of color variation - no colour looked perfectly readable. Sure, I could have moved it to the left, but that would keep me from making a 1280x1024 version...
For the record, the background is mostly composed by overlapped photos, with a few softlighted brushes and Shinta's tree. Yes, again. Go, me. The overlapped textures help to hide the so-so scan quality, since I don't really have enough free time to vector anymore >_>
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Chosen by and Saikusa
Oh that's beautiful! You kbnow what, it's so rare to see an AMG with grunged textures and muted colours. I wouldn't have dreamt of doing that (but I'm a walling newb). It's fantastic! A definitely download, save to PC & a fav... and kudos for the imagination & beautiful creation ^.^
Proposed by and highlighted by Saikusa.
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Elves Nov 01, 2005
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Albatross1 Nov 01, 2005
Oh my - this is so incredible. It's like looking at an old photograph - incredible style represented!
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exelro Nov 01, 2005
belldandee look so great >_< . awesome colors and mist effect . nice work
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megaohki Nov 01, 2005
It's interesting to see Oh My Goddes look so artsy, and surreal- even kinda dark.
I'm used to seeing bright bold colors w. the artwork from this series. -
Idril Nov 01, 2005
huummm your concept is just amazing! background is so pretty and me likes this colors! great job with scan and brushes too!
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Hikaru07 Nov 01, 2005
ooooohh...
good wall...
exelent efects of color ....good job...
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himeno22 Nov 01, 2005
WOW I LOVE IT!
its so awesome i love the whole thing^^ -
ElaniMoonstaf Nov 01, 2005
Ah so graceful, and yet I feel kind of sad. All the dark makes the feel of the paper kinda sad, not what you usually see for Ah My Goddess. Nice job! ^_^
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lordfan Nov 01, 2005
Oh this is really nice.
Only complaints are the text and the overall...mmm.
I'm not sure what to call it but it doesn't seem quite clear.
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Lumineux Nov 02, 2005
Wow, this is very beautiful! ^.^ I love the colors for the background and the image fading you did. Looks quite nice to me.
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flyindreams Nov 02, 2005
*^.^* Welcome back, although you didn't know me ^^;; I've wandered onto your site and your gallery and... like your walls <3 The colors and texture looks nice, although the texture overlay seems a tad too strong over the characters...
*re-reads your description about the texture* Oh. Lol.
I like the design under the text. And... *kicks brom* nothing wrong with starting a title with "and," lol. Overall... wonderful atmosphere, and nice composition too :) Keep up the awesome work X3 This wallie looks great, I doubt that you lost any of your walling skills ;)
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markjo Nov 02, 2005
Nice choice of colours, I like the pretty greenish tone of the wallpaper. It's one of the few OMG wallpapers which is not so candy-like in colour. The text is a bit hard to read, but that's just my minor complaint.
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gilion Nov 02, 2005
Really good! In my little opinion this is a great job. Great taste in using colours. Also the font text suits perfectly. Instead the tree on the background seems to me a bit out of place.
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faustVIII Nov 02, 2005
J'aime beaucoup la texture de fond :D
l'image est très bien intégré e et les couleurs vont bien ensemble !good job ;) !
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plx Nov 02, 2005
nice colors ... i'will certainly upload this work when comeback houme
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Doji Nov 02, 2005
The background is very beautiful ! Nice work, congratulation ! :)
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Arashi-san Nov 02, 2005
wooooooooooow the colors are great the scan fits perfect with the backround O.O i just love it
*add it to favs*greets Arashi-san
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lain Nov 02, 2005
Perfect background and colours (and lovely scan). This wall has a dark and magic sphere... beatifull! ^^
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Usagi-san Nov 02, 2005
wow i really like this. the green and the blue... i really like it a lot very awesome.
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kaisui1tatsu Nov 02, 2005
This is very pretty and it has a nice layout. I love how everything fits together! Good job!
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Vanbellsama Nov 02, 2005
vanbllesama dise :
que shoda esta berda
que es una presiosura jejejejejejje ^^
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yankees20 Nov 02, 2005
It is a nice picture! VERY GOOD! AWESOME!
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racka64 Nov 02, 2005
Excellent work ! I love the background- its greenish tone. and the scan infiltrates really nice into the picture. And the typos also fit the mood of the wallie.
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liquidblade Nov 02, 2005
OMG! you did an awesome job for this wallpaper! i congratulate u on your beautiful work!
have a nice day~
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