hmm that's really nice

a few points:
she only seems to have one breast
she had dislocated her collarbone
right eye is kinda dilated..

thats about it, clean it up (ink, photoshop) and it'll look fantastic
i'll be happy to vector this for you if you fix it up

what he said plus the left eye looks bad too around the bottom while your ajusting the left nonexistant boob add the outline of nipples that usualy wins people over @_@ it does me....if you really want to get people to like it make it apear wet and see through and show the belly button anywho i cant draw a stick man so keep up the good work dude

i would add the nipple....but im not that perverted