well i agree with you that some of the proportions are a little off, but still, a very nice doujin CoolBlueX-san! you did an especially great job on the small details, like the sandals and the gauntlet on the right arm! i also really like how you designed his zanpakuto! great job overall! :D
Artist Comment
first off...i know the character on the left is totally off in every way possible....like perspective, proportions stuff
like that
but i was too lazy to rub away stuff and change them cause i lack space and i was lazy...
now...on to his story...
Character's Story
Reito...
An ex-captain of the 10th devision...he was banished from Seireitei for trying to kill Ichimaru Gin
During his shinigami years, Reito had a twin brother, Reiki, who died at the hands of Ichimaru Gin during a battle which
he claimed he had killed Reiki by accident...
Reito who did not believe Gin's story, decided to seek the help of the captains but was rejected
Taking matters into his own hands, he decided to train as hard as possible and become a captain, then he would kill Gin
and avenge his brother.
Finally, after many years of training he finally became a captain and attempt to take Gin's life.
However, he failed and was thus banished...
Later on, as he roamed the lands of Rukongai, he loses himself in random battles with hollows and various bandits and shinigamis he comes across. Having lost all sanity, he traded eyes with a hollow just for kicks O_o he now wonders Rukongai...desperate...lost...and devoid of all hope
Zanpakuto
Katakiuchi...
which means revenge, is the name of Reito's zanpakuto.
This sword is held like a gunblade, but does not shoot bullets or the like...
It's black body can cut anything and seems to have a life of it's own. It can morph into any shape, but Reito
seldom uses this ability as he still prefers the sword form.
The trinkets on his sword can either be removed at will or can morph into anything, once the black blade of Katakiuchi
slashes the opponent, it can morph into daggers to inflict more damage
Bankai
Jibun...
or oneself...is the very image of Reiki, exactly how he was before he died...
This bankai may be small compared to other people's but he is just as deadly.
Eventhough, this bankai may seem to be just like any oridinary shinigami, his skill is equivelent to that of a captain
or any bankai out there...
He can also restore Reito's former age and looks as how it was before Reiki died. This confuses and enemy and makes
the battle much easier for Reito
Artist's Comments
damn i'm totally stoned from all the medication and sleeping...cause of the flu/cough i'm having now T_T
lol as said above...pose of reito...totally wrong and out of proportion...i admit it :P
i know i over did the crazy black thingy for the outfit...-.-
BUT IT'S THE STORY THAT COUNTS! (lol bad excuse)
anyways, i don't know how the name characters...lol i know reito's bro has the same name as a previous
character...but meh...*STONEZ*
i need to go sleep now...the medication is making me woozy
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Comments
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fireflywishes Retired Moderator Oct 17, 2005
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SilverBlue Oct 17, 2005
Nice doujin! Love the detail on the zanpakutou and the scar on his face :) good job!
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k1ru Oct 17, 2005
nice!! ^^
CoolBlueX!!
great picture! XD
gooooddddd jobbb!!! XD -
Chloe Retired Moderator Oct 17, 2005
Very cool! I like the detail on the left's face! Haha, the one on the right reminds me of Renji OX (er, from PoT)
All in all, a great doujin! -
Evanrued Oct 17, 2005
Well a lot of good came from this one. It really inspired me to do a shinigami for the contest lol. You have my thanks for that. But onto yours. Well. the one on the left is not entirely out of proportion, just a tad bit. And I also get tired during the process and tend to mess up, kind of like yesterday, I kept dropping everything I touched >< But If you start to get tired, rest and sleep. Then start again the next day. It always works for me. But back to the shinigami. Your story seems a bit thrown together, but its understanding. The Zanpakuto and Bankai are pretty good in names and design. And the character overall is pretty good. Overall its a big effort. Keep it up XD
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Liz Oct 17, 2005
Quote by SilverBlueNice doujin! Love the detail on the zanpakutou and the scar on his face :) good job!
love the details you applied, the characters look amazing too!
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Jucubus Oct 20, 2005
wow, that is amazing. i love it! holy cow.
the one thing i love the most though is your zanpakutou, it is amazing. gosh, good job, wow.
i creat custom shinigamis as well and let me tell you, this is a great inspiration.
keep it up, this is awesome. -
shinorei Oct 20, 2005
Good description of this new character and nice drawing. I really appreciate the information you passed on and nice, nice artwork. ^_^ Gambate!
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walkure245 Oct 21, 2005
I kinda like the guy on the left though. O_o His outfit is lil more original and that has I like his gunblade. Makes me nostalgic of FF8. Haha~ I like the style and the aloofness or worldliness and it really matches the story. This is really getting intersting. Nice work~
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flyindance Oct 22, 2005
really, lots of excuse eh? can't 4give u for tat. ~_~
but just joking la. hahhaha! :D
i must say i like the clothes but too bad i dun like the characters
very sorry abt tat
but different people has different opinion.
but the story is good.
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ayane-heine Oct 22, 2005
wooo~~~ i like the effects on theor clothing and the sword.. o_0
but you can improve abit on their hair and facial expression~~
nice drawing oh~~~ :D -
themoicon Feb 06, 2008
cool shinigami
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