nice drawing, the chara looks pretty good, but her eyes have too much white, you should shade them a bit.
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well, i just draw this in morning.... i used 40 minutes to complete this artwork.... think like don't have any mistake of it... but i still need some comments... thanks! :)
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Kiako Sep 23, 2005
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RainOfStars Sep 23, 2005
Nice drawing. But it looks a bit different from the anime. Can't tell what><
Nevertheless, it is still a wonderful drawing. Good job
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fireflywishes Retired Moderator Sep 23, 2005
nice job eden-san! it looks pretty good! however, maybe some shading would add some more depth to your doujin... well, keep up the good work! :D
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endsoftheworld99 Sep 23, 2005
This is very good! I love the pose you chose, you drew it perfectly I think! I especially like the eyes, you did a great job on them! Keep up the great work! take care!
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TakamuraReiji Sep 24, 2005
Hmm...really white...I remembered you said you don't like to shade because it'll look dirty. But you know, it's okay that you don't shade. But at least try shading the eyes. It looks really plain if there's no trace of shading on it.
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Carmen Nov 11, 2005
She is cute! (I hate when the paper is not enough) She looks very accurate, congratulations. (I like her better than the other one)
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