for the start, i say not yet, it looks very much the same, your lines are too much in distortion....
i have an artbook collection of my own, but it took me years of filtering to get the great result that is in there now,
i had to learn from scratch, so i am telling you here that this is what i think, you don't have to take it as the
holy grail, OK?
following the above, the lines are broken, the nose is too left, causing distortion to the balance of the face, your
eyes are also too big and congested in the middle of the face
since the hair is solid, it would be wise to try and make sure they are cleaned up further to prevent the shadows to the
pencil dusts covering up the face/
now, her body, her shoulders are kinda wide in my opinion, making it hard to find her feminity///
however, there is overall balance in her figure, there is for the angle she is sitting, it would be making it balanced
in overall. your drawing of her head can be rectified.
her legs are the biggest mistake, totally too short and making her look like stumped, even in a seated position, her
legs cut down her size and it makes us difficult to see her lines.
her feet is also too round and stump. you might want to learn anatomy first...experience tells me that this is good
practice, most of my artwork is based on that...
anyway, it is ok, for a beginner, you have achieved further than i did in the first days, so keep it up, i hope you like
what i say ok and don't be offended by my words...ok, see you around!