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Original: My drawing so far

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I Just want to see if i made any progress. Can you tell me if i did?

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  1. Devildude Sep 22, 2005

    for the start, i say not yet, it looks very much the same, your lines are too much in distortion....
    i have an artbook collection of my own, but it took me years of filtering to get the great result that is in there now, i had to learn from scratch, so i am telling you here that this is what i think, you don't have to take it as the holy grail, OK?

    following the above, the lines are broken, the nose is too left, causing distortion to the balance of the face, your eyes are also too big and congested in the middle of the face
    since the hair is solid, it would be wise to try and make sure they are cleaned up further to prevent the shadows to the pencil dusts covering up the face/
    now, her body, her shoulders are kinda wide in my opinion, making it hard to find her feminity///
    however, there is overall balance in her figure, there is for the angle she is sitting, it would be making it balanced in overall. your drawing of her head can be rectified.
    her legs are the biggest mistake, totally too short and making her look like stumped, even in a seated position, her legs cut down her size and it makes us difficult to see her lines.
    her feet is also too round and stump. you might want to learn anatomy first...experience tells me that this is good practice, most of my artwork is based on that...
    anyway, it is ok, for a beginner, you have achieved further than i did in the first days, so keep it up, i hope you like what i say ok and don't be offended by my words...ok, see you around!

  2. Faikenshin Sep 22, 2005

    This is the 2nd time i have draw manga in my life so i am not offended^^

  3. pamkips Sep 22, 2005

    well the girl herself is okay...what's bothering me is the seat she's sitting in....it's messy...well yes and what you could do is well is dunno but great job so far

  4. StJL Sep 22, 2005

    i think its pretty good, you should try to fix the legs and foot
    good job though
    keep it up ;) :)

  5. kotaru-revi Sep 22, 2005

    work in the legs and the face and I sure that will be a wonderfull picture :) :) :)

  6. screenlooker Sep 23, 2005

    yeah!
    thats good!
    all that needs work are the feet!

  7. dragongirli Sep 23, 2005

    yesh, the anatomy looks a bit more on-target. good job!

  8. sukie Sep 26, 2005

    wow...i love the details!! suepr work!!

  9. MEISCHI Banned Member Oct 18, 2005

    i like it viv!!!!!!!!!!!
    naya
    naya
    naya
    naya
    naya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  10. Akane-baka Jan 01, 2006

    Wow! It's your second time of drawing manga? O_O Wow. I'm impressed. =] Good job on the piccie.

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