You need to work on plotting your paths better. Some of the lines aren't exactly as 'flush' as they
should be. You've got a few angles and such that just kinda go off of the line art into the white background.
Also....don't know if it's a style thing you're going for but the jagged lines aren't realy working.
They're all prominant edges...would look better as curves.
Well...keep practicing...that's what good pen tooling/vectoring takes....lots of practice.
Artist Comment
Seems like just yesterday
You were a part of me
I used to stand so tall
I used to be so strong
Your arms around me tight
Everything, it felt so right
Unbreakable, like nothin' could go wrong
Now I can't breathe
No, I can't sleep
I'm barely hanging on
Behind these hazel eyes-kelly clarkson
Just a vector i decided to do. I've been pretty sick lately..send me some getwell cards ^.^
I've been getting pretty odd fevers>.< Yuckie..now me stay home shickie..T.T
Mellie will cook me chicken noodles.ne? heheh^.^
I hope you like it, and i already know one hand is croocked -.- I have blurry eyes from sickness>.<
TO MY MT FRIENDS
Gomen nasai..but i've been trying to keep in touch with all of you..but i cant seem to since i've been very
busy..so consider this a HIYO^.^
meow and im pretty sad too because people on mt have decided to take my sickness to their advantage to create multiple
accounts and diss my randomly and then send me distrubing posts..
Hope you enjoy^.^
[*Please ask me before you use this ^.~*]
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-acid- Sep 15, 2005
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tetsuo211 Sep 15, 2005
Simplicity sometimes works but I see you have pulled it off with this piece. nice job.... well done :)
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Saikusa Retired Moderator Sep 15, 2005
Lovely vector, toxictea! You've really caught the pose, fashion and atmosphere of the original pose ~ it's from DREAM's scan, isn't it :D
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Lenne Sep 15, 2005
No..it's excellent girl.I really love this vector...Marvelous job,you made.
Get well soon my friend...sending you some get well kisses on your cheek! XP -
Eimin Sep 15, 2005
Quote by -acid-You need to work on plotting your paths better. Some of the lines
aren't exactly as 'flush' as they should be. You've got a few angles
and such that just kinda go off of the line art into the white
background. Also....don't know if it's a style thing you're going for
but the jagged lines aren't realy working. They're all prominant
edges...would look better as curves. Well...keep practicing...that's
what good pen tooling/vectoring takes....lots of practice.Uh, she just said she was sick :P I think it's nice, better than I'd ever do ;) Get better soon, tea^^
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AC2N Sep 15, 2005
How the hell do you do that !!!!
It's a really good work !! The girl is so sexy... simple but sexy ;)
The quality is here... congrats Toxictea... I love it.
hope to see more soon....
see yaaaa -
tripleG Sep 15, 2005
Good job!
She looks good!! Anyways keep up the good work!
PS: Vectors are images pepole alter to look better right?
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Hasaki-Keissi Sep 15, 2005
That's a nice picture. So, what was your inspiration? I must ask, did you draw that manually?
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AngelKate Sep 15, 2005
Really awesome as usual. I haven't the slightest clue how to do that. XD You always do such a lovely job. :) Keep it up! :)
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LilLaoRyo704 Sep 15, 2005
Quote by LenneNo..it's excellent girl.I really love this vector...Marvelous job,you made.
Get well soon my friend...sending you some get well kisses on your cheek! XP
great job, its amazing, its very punk like, you did great, ja-ne -
Chloe Retired Moderator Sep 15, 2005
This is awesome! Very neatly done! Love the image, it's uber-cool!
Oh and, chicken soup is best when you're sick XP Get well soon! -
pamkips Sep 15, 2005
you're sick? *brings toxictea chicken...er.......fish soup...wtf?.....*
well get well soon!...well you did this while you're sick right now?....wow....i would be DEAD if i was sick...well that's because i'm wierd....everything kills me.....anyways good job on this vector...hopefully you or someone will make a kick butt wallie with it...talk about original vector...^_^ get well soon toxictea23 -
Asigha Sep 15, 2005
ddddddduuuddddddddeee this vector is good :D :D
good job on it....
*walks up the street n brings suuki sum tea* lolz
ookie well keep up the work hommie n hope to see u bak at school
ciaoz <3 -
SharinganKnight Sep 15, 2005
the edges are too rough, are you using the curve feture of the pen tool? also...no outline? O.o but the over all vector is pretty good I guess.
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kajimamidori Sep 15, 2005
the vector's look so cool! O.O
because of the girl and her clothes~ XD
a fine masterpiece xP -
MayaNatsume17 Sep 15, 2005
This is really nice. The only thing I see wrong with it is the hand, but you already mentioned that ^^
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SweetGrl Sep 16, 2005
I love the this song "Behind These Hazel Eyes" by Kelly Clarkson!! It's a very sweet song!! And you did an awesome job on this wonderful vector, Suuki!! You deserve a big hug! *hugs* By the way, i am so sorry that you're sick!! Hope you'll get better soon!! ^^ And that's ok if you are too busy to keep in touch with us! Even though i really want to get to know you more! :( Well, please get well soon, Suuki!! Keep up the great work on vectors, too!!
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DREAM Sep 16, 2005
Quote by saikusaLovely vector, toxictea! You've really caught the pose, fashion and atmosphere of the original pose ~ it's from DREAM's scan, isn't it :D
yes, you are correct saikusa, that is my scan. my DPS 01 E scan can be found here . giving a reference to the scan source or artist is a good idea since not evereyone is familiar with Ogi's work.
jeez Kelly Clarkson? this the first time i have heard some1 admit to liking her so called "manufactured music".
lol, i suppose a little "paranioa" never hurt anyone...
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semanga Sep 16, 2005
wow she is very cool honey
u did a great doujin work
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Tantaga Sep 16, 2005
Very stylish like the original. Keeping to a limited number of colors and bring primarily black and white makes the styl of this vector stand out more. There are a few little jaggies in some places, but fit doesn't detract from the entire vector piece.
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maldita42 Sep 17, 2005
hey!!!!! yeah!!! Your pic is cool!!!
The best things for me is sleep and lisent my songs!!! In special if is Jrock ... japanesse electronic music ... Jmusic!! Yeah!!
Nice pic!.. thanks for sharing this!
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ganstamonica Sep 17, 2005
Very sexy vector,Suuki-chan!! I freakin love it! XD Awesoome werk,buddie! ;)
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VagrantDreamer Sep 17, 2005
hey you, nice vector specially when you sick, personally i'd be like watching movies or gorging myself on soup! XD
haha neway, thanks for the vector, shes pretty cute by the way :P -
sukie Sep 17, 2005
mmm...this looks great!! so fine and neat!! super super work!!... i wonder waht kinda sounds she like...
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