nice doujinshi AIR art you did !
i like the background of this doujinshi
Thanks for sharing~

Hahaha! Nice nice! Rythem drawn her well. You drawn her kawaiiness and innocent look out. n_n Awsome. However the logo, you should not cut the girl off the boys hand Leave it as its original state will do. Anyway I do hope you win the contest. XP

Hmm.... it's pretty good! As usual, I love your coloring.... Plus, a soft tone fits Misuzu ~gao~ very well. Un!

wow...nicely done, rythem. I think she looks nice and the bg is lovely. Keep it up!

beautiful! you made a great job on the coloring! wonderful job....keep it up ^^

Wow, that's really beautiful. I don't know what to say....
Anyway, thanks for sharing this awsome work of yours and good luck for the contest.
*adds to fav*

So soft and pretty .
From the ripples in her dress to the way her hair is moving, you've captured movement really well ^__^ .

I definetly have to learn how to do that, looks awsome, great color selection.

I like it! She's really cute! And the soft colors you've used are really nice, it fits the picture. It really feels AIR-y

I like it! She looks cute... C'mon you know how to draw! I like the coloring that you did. The background is nice too!

weee new work from you ^_^ colouring is really beautiful, like the light orange and pinkish colours ! birds in the sky are nice details and lovely too don't know the series but the character you drew looks pretty even if she looks little sad. overall wonderful work again rythem-chan, keep it up !

wonderful doujinshi:) the colors and the concept is great:)

THis is so beautiful!!!
Woah!! JUst great, great!!
I love that girl - her hair, eyes...so cute!!! Nice work!!

great job on the drawing, the chra looks cute and i like the background, the colors are well chosen and the image of the chara in the back too.
keep it up

Great drawing^^
You really capture Misuzu's essence.
Good luck in the contest^^

wow...this is sucha nice doujinshi!!!! and it's Air too!!
misuzu looks soo good and i especially like what you did in the bg, with misuzu doing V
ur really good at drawing. keep it up!!

hum too many comments here already... don't like that .

anyway what i want to say is that the smiling girl behind is really awesome, i think she's even better than the one in the foreground (okay same girl right? ). but maybe that cheerful expression is amplified by the kinda sad look the other one has, so it's a great contrast you've done here. just for that, thumbs up.
colors are really great, the flow of air can be felt as well. just one point : the shading on her dress is kinda weird.

great job XP

Wow! I Love the colors! They're so soft and suit the picture perfectly! Excellent job!

Did you draw and colour that from scratch? Wow. Excellent drawing. Colouring is also very impressive. Keep it up!

Woow!! It's simply beautiful and sooo kawaii!!!
I don't think she's too thin and her eyes are perfect! I luv your style <3 ^__^
i wish you good luck and keep up the wonderful work!!

omg.. *__* everything is just perfect.. the folds, the linearts.. the coloration.. the atmosphere.. I love them all.. nyaaa... you're just perfect... ;__; arggghh.. *dies* o.o but before, I'll fave it..

ok.. i just checked out the larger version, and i have to say that is one really good doujinshi.. yup. good luck at the -air- contest. o btw. i'm also participating in the -AIR-contest for doujinshis. may the best artist win.

Jaa. mata nee.

(o btw, stop by my gallery if you can.. bye bye)

i think the drawing looks very nice
u have a very interesting window design for the bg; very nice
my only oppion is that the colouring is too light , can't see it
nice work, and good luck in the contest ^-^

Cute doujinshi!^-^ I'm not really familiar with this series, but I love the way you drew the main character---she's so pretty! ^-^ The background's really nice too---makes me feel all peaceful (and it reminds me of summer ) Thanks for sharing this and I won't be surprised if you won the contest! I'll be looking forward to your many works of art and wallpapers I always expect the best from rhythem!