hehe..ce desen fain.. hm nu mai am favorite sa pun dar promit ca am sa pun saptamana viitoare .. am vazut Vampire Hunter D si e super parerea mea

wow..nice drawing.. I like the shading.. although the face is a bit scary..

First, Vampire Hunter D is a very good choice, since it has some awesome art designed by Amano.
Then about your drawing overall, you managed to get a really dynamic portray thanks to that extreme expression, and that's why I like this sketch.
Now for some critique about your pencil work (personal opinion of course, so don't take everything I say for true ) , I don't see any big mistake, but you can improve on it. The lines come out a bit jagged, because you're using many strokes for a same line. If you do a curve with a single stroke, the final result will be a lot smoother. Not only for the lineart, when you're filling dark space, it seems you're using a lot of little strokes. The cross-hatch technique can give some awesome effects but you must limit your strokes to very few directions. Blending with finger smudging is another solution to get some easy and spectacular effects. Ah and the sketch would look even better with higher contrast, which can be done before or after scanning ^^.
Honestly, if you keep practicing, you should improve in no time since you already got the most difficult parts, and your sketches will get from good to awesome .

Yeah! I like it, very clean and good shading, you heve talent and most of all... patience!

i love this most really great done! line, details, shading really great but i'm not sure about the expression of him his eyes really feels sadness & lonely for me but his mouth really feels angry like....arr.....wanna kill someone @_@;;; sorry for my stupid mess, maybe i'm working too much now _*_

I've never seen Vampire Hunter D and I've always wanted to see it. How ironic!
The pic looks great, I like the shading. And the expression on his face? Priceless!